I don't know how you do it at all. You somehow put the right amounts of humor, darkness, adventure, tension, action, all the elements you little chemist you.  Too much of any of those could spoil the story you're telling. You always blow me away.  Case in point. Lyle hitting Jarod and then cheering is hilarious. He's never bested Jarod this way. Lyle is a child sometimes, like the Jarod, Parker, Angelo. They are children who didn't properly grow up. You demonstrate that exquisitely.

It never gets old and it's definitely never boring or dull. Stay well and safe and write some more when you can. Really grateful to you. Cheers!

Freaking amazing. Please update soon. Update your other stories too please.

Woot! You've been missed. I know you like just updated lol but I still miss you. Classic Jarod and Parker going on up in this mad house fandom right now. The way Jarod lost it there when Parker didn't back down and he FINALLY stopped being oblivious ... oooh and then Lyle for the win. All of the elements are present and accounted for to make this Pretender Perfect. GIVE ME MORE WOMAN!

This is dark like really dark and I know dark. Not this chapter per se but this story. I slipped away from palling again with Dean and Sam over in Lawrence, Kansas to come all the way to this universe to read what one of my twitter pals says is really horrific stuff. I've seen things man. I haven't seen leeches though or seen anything about bloodletting until I read this story. I hear you got more darkness. I'm here for the darkness. Don't be alarmed tho. I'm only here to read and explore this strange universe. Man you have a strong writing voice and I had to keep closing my mouth because it kept falling open.  Will you be posting more chapters? Say yes.

Squee! Mirage update. I love it.

Satan. lol. I love it love Parker's reaction to it. She totally knew it was Jarod. Her shock at how Jarod hurt Lyle was surprising and not surprising to me. What really caused a big hammer striking metal sound to me was the enormous reaction she had to shoving Jarod and screaming no at him and trying to tell him to keep his shit together. She shocked herself and there's that unspoken no-touch contract between them. But I still want to know what happened during that weekend the spent together that you mentioned in an earlier chapter. Was there touching involved? Is that why she's so shocked? Or is she shocked because they didn't touch then either. You perfectly capture these characters and their circumstances and all of the nuances. I can read this forever. Please don't let it end too soon. I already want more. Thank you so much and stay well.