Ok now that was just hot. Lyle and Jarod are hot together. I said it. There.

These chapters are so small I read the rest and had to come back to review and that's my only complaint. ;) :) You write so well that I can see what is going on and I gotta say I love what I see. Jarod thrusting the gun into Lyle's mouth and into his throat is more awesomesauce on an already solid story. The little something xtra you put in is amazeballs.

You astound me. How you're able to write so many different stories at once is a mystery. Perhaps you're a genius? Oblivion and Lucanae are both excellent pieces, the substance and quality in each one isn't dimished by the quantity. Some might say Jarod went too far with Lyle but they'd be wrong. Jarod loves Sydney like a son loves a father or grandfather and would go to any length I believe to protect him. It's a violent scene, a masculine scene where Jarod pushes the gun into Lyle's mouth. It's because Jarod is afraid. The first line where Lyle scolds the driver is masculine too. You are brilliant at writing the genders. Mirage you're brilliant. There's not much else to say. Until next time...

Oohhh deliciousness. "drives like my sister" That car does rock will be rocking after Miss Parker gets out sometimes lol. This was dark and nice. This side of Jarod, trembling and enraged tryng to control himself and not kill Lyle. THis is what Jarod would do if Sydney were missing. He's got the wrong guy this time though. The realization that Lyle was telling the truth ... Jarod's thoughts. Love this all so much. But ooh so short Mirage. More please.