No foreshadowing yet. Gotta love Sydney trying to help. Always trying to help.
Reviewer: lisa Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/03/23 03:53 am
Oo. ? It wasn't Jarod? I'm glad it wasn't. Now I'm even more afraid for Sydney though. The way you write mental illness is for real though.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/21 02:57 am
Oh duh I'm a dunce. You've been regularly updating this and I didn't see where there was more chapters. Hooray for not having to wait too long. I started reading one story one time and waited for like 13 years for a sentence but it never came I try to only read complete fics and I see you have completed many so I can't wait to read those. I'm trusting you to complete this too tho. Please. PS: so glad that isn't Jarod.
Reviewer: Jodi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/20 10:53 pm
You really don't pull any punches. The chapters are short but clear and concise. You know how to say what needs to be said. I can't believe you don't have an editor. It's top notch. I hate to say it but this is so much better written and more interesting than Pretender Rebirth, Saving Luke, etc. You're a really terrific author.
Reviewer: Laura Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/19 12:52 am
Without twitter I wouldn't have known you had updated. I know how you feel about social media but I'm just saying.
Your writing is vivid and the characters... wow. I've never seen Sydney written so accurately. Reading your work is like watching the series. I see the story unfold, the characters faces. I feel like I'm there with them. Uhh Magical. I'm seriously terrified for Sydney.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 01/02/17 11:34 pm
I know how much you love Sydney. You do still love Sydney? I'm surprised this hasn't happened to him. Plausible as always. And very short.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 01/02/17 09:18 pm
Oh my wows! Girl! I know how much you love and enjoy Patrick Bauchau's work so this must have hurt you alot to write. But you finally got your reprieve from Jarod so are you relieved and hurt by this at the same time? Keep going and big hugs from me for what you must be feeling now. Amazing.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/17 10:21 pm
Gasp! Not Sydney. Oh Mirage. Please please please. But totally see how that would happen. Where is Jarod and Miss Parker? Come on. Give it. Gripping work. So that voice in the first chapter? It was the guy's own mind? WOW! Almost too fast paced and very short but like a big punch in the gut with all the intensity you wrote into it and I felt like I was there. You do that with every story, yank me by the hand and pull me in. What a scary ride. Have to know what happens.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/17 12:36 am
This was completely terrifying. Too short but I'll survive. Will Sydney? I hope so. I love how probable this is. This should have transpired during the series. You captured it brilliantly without making us hate the intruder. It's not his fault he's insane. You are brilliant with sensitive matters. I will wait impatiently for more. Until next time Mirage...
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/16 12:40 am
You gave two chapters at once so you get two reviews for them. More of this. I have to see if Sydney is ok..like now. You are amazing really. You know Sydney and all the characters so well and this is plausible too. You already know your original characters rock. Keep this coming. Merry Christmas to you and peace. :)
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/16 08:12 pm
