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Title: Chapter 1

Magnificent. You capture the allure of the Pretender series, the essence, and that forbiddenness too. So absorbing and I can't get enough.

They should bring our series back to television and YOU should be involved with the writing.

 Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/07/23 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awesome first chapter. I love your insights into the troubled mind.

 Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/03/23 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

please update this one too

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/05/22 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Exquisite. Another poignant chapter and I'm pleasantly surprised by the character devolpment and growth. I'm, as always, astounded by your prose and characterizations, and look forward to reading the remainder.

Ciao!

 Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/22 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1

First rate writing. People leave each other but the love doesn't always leave too and in these circumstances this makes total sense to me. Parker didn't walk away because she didn't love Jarod. Jarod didn't stay away and respect her wishes because he didn't love Parker. Love can mean giving a person distance too. Thought-provoking work as usual and always incredibly profound.

 Reviewer: Jeremy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/22 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh my godesses I can't even right now but I will anyway. Mirage, I love the way she told him, the way he didn't pick up on what she was saying like he also didn't realize he was shouting I love you at her. He's still dealing with so much and almost lost Sydney and Sydney's the reason he nearly killed Lyle and I think Jarod is experiencing a crisis and I love it. He's so used to knowing everything and how everything will go and being in control of everything and all of the consequences and now this has challenged everything he thought he  knew. I love it. It's so plausible, too. I love how you challenge everything, too, and keep me riveted on the story. It's amazing. More, please?

 Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 12:45 am
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch mate! I can't get enough.

 Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/22 09:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1

omg more!!!

 Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/22 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 1

 

Business took me away from wifi, and it's a pleasure to be back in the land of the living and reading you again. Every letter is so well placed and I don't have to tell you how well you write. The characters are exactly the characters. I'll be quick and say I can't wait to read your next chapter. You really know how to keep the pages turning. Congrats!

Ciao!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/21 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awesome job. I love your work!

 Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/21 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 1

hoping you update soon. PLEASE! I can't believe all these original ideas you have in a fandom this old. So fresh and real. I've been reading since the beginning of fanfic here and this is the best. The characters are perfect, not too soft not too mean just like I remember.

 Reviewer: crackerjacks Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/21 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm so happy you are still here and now ringing in the 25th with us. You are the one I keep coming back for and definitely one of the best authors. Keep going please.

 Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/21 09:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I have been away too long. This is frightening and wonderful. I'm hooked.

 Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/21 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

Lyle has been through hell. He's done bad sh!t but bad sh!t was done to him and that's why. This is probably why Jarod never killed Lyle or never had Lyle arrested, why he never took down Lyle the way he did other baddies. If Lyle was so bad Jarod should have done something about him. Thanks for updating and being you.

 Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/07/21 04:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

More.

Now.
please.

omg.

 Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/21 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Loving this and still waiting for more. I hope you're ok. It's been a while.

 Reviewer: Kels Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/21 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

Delightful!!! Damn, girl, you're an amazing writer. I'm wowed again. More please.

 Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/21 10:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1

well done!I'm such a Jarod fan and I usually read the Jarod stories and pass everything else by but you yanked me in. I'm one of Michael T. Weiss 's biggest ever fans, have a selfie and everything though he was like in the background of my selfie so maybe didn't know lol. Show me your selfie with him and I'll show you mine. If don't have a selfie with him you need to get one and you need to update this and all your fics cos ima read them all. I love the way you write you really have command of the wrod and the characters. more please.



Author's Response:
Hi, Sabrina.
Oh, you want me to go get selfie with him? Right now? During a pandemic? A Pandemic Edition Selfie: he and I wear masks and stand six feet apart as if we're about to drop a new hella-serious medical series--- and, oh what the hell, we should just go ahead and drop a new medical drama.

(not to mention that selfies are so—dramatically exaggerate the o—2019)

He was in the background? Mm. Quick question: should you be taking photos of him without his consent?
I'm legitimately curious.
And I'm gald you liked my scribblings.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.


 Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/21 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 1

*can't stop reading.

I'm drunk on brilliant grammar and still in this storyverse/not back in reality yet.



Author's Response:

Hi, The Miss Parker.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/21 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Magnifique!

You have a command of the stories and characters that is rare. You are the most gifted author! You have mastered the craft of writing and storytelling and always leave me amazed. I dare to ask for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Archange. Meh, no, I'm not the most gifted anything. I know I'm not supposed to argue with reviewers. I'm supposed to thank you and move on.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/21 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm usually drawn to Jarod and Parker central fics, smut, hardcore sex and evil Jarod being a rapist because after cutting a man and taking his organ dear innocent Jarod seemed capable of violating anyone's autonomy BUT I love this. I love how Jarod is all in a rage cos of Syd being gone. I need more young lady and I needs it now. You impress the shit out of me.



Author's Response:
Wow, that's what happened on my dvds, too. Confirmation at last! I'm relieved. I was beginning to wonder if there was another slightly varying version of the dvds in which Jarod didn't eagerly remove a man's organ without his consent (or after consent was withdrawn). This is good news for me: it's evidence that I'm not delusional and that there are no biases regarding Jarod.

It's bad news, too; I don't own a one-of-a-kind dvd haha.
I agree that he crossed the line, and it's not illogical to believe he's capable of violating bodily autonomy in other ways. He abducted the man, restrained him inside a cheap motel, the man woke, began pleading, Jarod sedated the guy, cut him open, stole something from him. In this situation—not to minimize organ theft—at least the dude can steal back his kidney. Jarod became the monster. He's capable of anything.

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/05/20 04:36 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Woot woot Mirage update. I'm always totally stoked for more of your writing and I'm already craving more. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kelli, for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/20 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

edge of the seat story please let Sydney be ok.



Author's Response:

Of course. I love Sydney. Who doesn't love Sydney? Thank you for reading and reviewing, Stacy.

 

 Reviewer: Stacy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/20 04:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

Chills. I read the summary and it involves Syd so I guess I know where this guy is going... is it Jarod? He's well fleshed out and described. Seems crazy but that's the Centre right? Gahhh. I hope it's not Jarod. I hope you'll update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jodi.

Psst: it isn't Jarod.

 Reviewer: Jodi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/20 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I need more now. Please. OMG. Jarod's "that's not how this works" just kills it. I love him. I love that you write these characters the way they were and how they should be!



Author's Response:

Hi, Selma.

I wasn't certain about that line, but --- I'm not certain about the rest of the lines either. I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Selma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/20 11:23 pm
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