please please don't forget about this one
Author's Response:
I won't, Archange.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/15 10:02 pm
Finally someones get suspicious about Jarods faked background. Great how Rachel saves him. Now that a Deus-Ex-Machina.
Reviewer: Shaack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/04/15 10:26 pm
I really love the Zina-Character!
Reviewer: shaack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/04/15 10:22 pm
Thank you for your Story. I like the characterzation of the two cops and the descreption of the the crime scene very much. You have a very pictureresque way of writing and I learned a lot new and very beautiful vocabluary (for English is not my mothertounge).
I am looking forward to read the next chapters.
Shaack
Author's Response:
Thank you, shaack, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: shaack Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/04/15 06:21 pm
I will feed your muse and you anything you two need to continue this amazing story Mirage! Please I beg you don't ever stop writing. I hear rumors sometimes. I know you are busy, I know you are writing in real life and getting published. I know all that but please, just one update every now and then will make my day.
Author's Response:
There was a time I would asked you to send bourbon haha. The Muses need to be starved. Perhaps then I would have some peace. Don't listen to idle gossip. I am busy, I am writing in real life (many projects) but I haven't announced that I'm leaving fanfic. I wouldn't announce it if I were. I'd just fade away into oblivion. I'd miss you all too much. I can definitey update every now and then and I'm glad you understand. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kelli.
Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/04/15 09:43 pm
I dont' think Jarod is guilty is he? Either way....terrific writing as alway. The only author of Pretender caliber anymore. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
You know I can't answer that. Yet (I'm not certain if I even know haha). I'm truly glad that you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/15 01:40 am
I have nothing original to add. You are a genius. I hope Miss Parker will help Jarod. More please?
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 11/04/15 04:11 am
I can't get enough. THere I've said it now please give me more of this. When the hell are Jarod and Parker going to meet in this? The build up is killing me.
Author's Response:
Haha. It's not "killing" you. Say it ain't so. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Miss Chloe.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 10/04/15 01:45 am
Ooh! uhhhh! Mirage! It's time for Jarod and Parker to hook up girlfriend! Please make it so. Exquisite writing as always. Every fic of yours could easily be a series continuation. So plausible. YOu are the only author who does right by the characters and the series. I want more and more.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:54 pm
"I've reviewed his plan," Raines continued in a laudatory tone, meeting Lyle's gaze, "and it's brilliant.""Oh, yes," sang Parker bitterly, "it's a screaming success if the goal was multiple causalities," she said reproachfully."
BOOM! LOL!
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:49 pm
Rachel is also unraveling lol. I like that no one is invincible. You put the characters in deep **** and then untangle it and get them out in a plausible way. Intelligent and elegant and succinct. I love it.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:46 pm
I love it! "And it just screams intrigue and mystery, doesn't it?""Mm," purred Parker, "in a thousand languages." LOL! That is just like Miss Parker. Thank you thank you! "There were no wasted seconds watching live and unsuspecting employees doing their jobs, snapshots of life and death in lurid juxtaposition. "
Ahhhhhhhh Beautiful.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:44 pm
Rachel. I don't know about her. Or why Jarod was having sex with her while he was having sex with Zoe. What a playa. lol . It's so refreshing to read you Mirage, after reading around. You really are my favorite author. So...is it the clone...oh nevermind, I know you will explain everything. :)
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:40 pm
Wait. I feel so stupid. My bad. He's only been implicated. Not charged. Sorry.
Awesome chapter. More Miss Parker. You are an artist with words. THere's nothing more I can say. It's wonderful Mirage.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:37 pm
Thank you for the note. I hate cross overs!! Passionately! Zina is wild. I love her bas ass attitude. It's like a younger, low income Miss Parker.
"Ah rumors, the coin of the realm" lol! Crammed pack with snark. LOL Jarod will still save her life if she chokes on gum. Too sweet. That doesn't sound like a cold hard killer? Did I miss something?
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:35 pm
Oh snap! Miss P is on her game. I love it! Love all the high techy stuff! Amazing!
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:32 pm
I went away for a while because after reading the official novel Rebirth by Steve and Craig I was disappointed and the xmas fan fic thing was #*@**@ and I won't be buying that novel/story/whatever either and it will never be canon in my mind. YOU are canon to many of us. I want YOUR novel. You brought me back again when I saw the twitter traffic. I'm so addicted to your stories. This is one is awesome. I just read the entire thing. The chaps are sooo short Mirage but the momentum is magnificent! I love the way it begins with your Pretender worhty original characters. Top notch Mirage. As only you can be.
Author's Response:
I see. I would rather not talk of- uh certain things. Mm moving on. I hope the momentum is okay. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Lorraina, and welcome back.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/15 10:27 pm
Holy #%#(! I want more right now! Hurry up and write woman.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/15 10:34 pm
That is just cruel! Leaving us hanging...
Please post more for us soon.
Author's Response:
Haha. I'll post more.
Maybe.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/15 12:34 am
I've read this entire story about 20 times now and I must get more soon. You are the best writer Mirage always with something original for us and something to say. Your stories are plausible and would fit into a movie or an episode and I can't say that about any other author. Where is the rest? Jarod and Miss Parker need to get together next. Come on. Please!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/15 11:22 pm
ding dong the men witches are gone... thank you for this!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/15 11:19 pm
OH it's Jarod on the video!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/15 11:18 pm
I am so excited for this! Merci! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, MlleParker.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/15 11:16 pm
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm jumping up and down in aniticipation. Please don't make me wait too long. I love this story and I wish you were writing the novels. I wish it so hard for you Mirage! I love you! Hope your migraine is all better now. Thank you for sharing your genius talents. You are amazing.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're jumping and down. I love it when everyone is happy. Thank you, Angela, for asking. Yes, the migraine is gone. Thank you for reading and reviewing. You are amazing. Save your wishes for something that has at least a ghost of a chance. Don't waste them on me.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/04/15 10:29 pm
MORE! I wish you were writing the Pretender novels. DOH! That is a no brainer! You are the most awesomeest!
Author's Response:
Consider it done. Because it is done. Thank you, Miss Parkere, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/15 01:13 am
