Hi that was a good story and I love the ending.
Thank you, I was in a mood for "happyend".Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/14 11:20 pm
The complex emotional nature between the two runs deep here. I enjoyed re-reading this piece several times over, and each time I discover something more revealing hidden in between the lines than transcends mere words. Images and emotions start to come into play now and I dont know if its my own imagination I'm lost in thats filling in the blanks or a progressive realization of a hidden past ingeniously implied by the story itself or something the author is purposefully putting into your mind. Some of the best stoies Ive read are like this. You cant put the book down after having read it the first time, because there is always something new to discover.
To conclude I would have to say based on the characters being described in this story that there is another incident that occured between the two not written here that may be the bigger reason for the friction rather than just the Centre. Who knows, maybe I can find out more on the next pass...
Wow, thank you, definitely one of the lenghtiest reviews I had ever gotten. And yes, sometimes reading something multiple times opens new dimensions of the story, I am an avid re-reader as well.Reviewer: SimTec Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/14 05:52 pm
I think I've seen this story on AO3 but I didn't comment at the time, so I'll do it here. I thougth the writing on this piece was excellent, a great little moody story from MP's perspective.
Thank you, and it's a sad time when instead of writing new stuff, you move your older one around the internet.Reviewer: MarieL Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/14 09:17 pm