Nothing could be gut wrenching that reading Miss Parker is dead. You had me worried but you redeemed yourself quickly. Jarod didn't give up. You took us on an international journey and gave us a snapshot of the culture. I have cardomom on the grocery list. I'll be treating my wife to a recipe I found after reading this earlier. I wasn't as offput by the intimacy as I thought I'd be. They had respectable, tasteful relations. I think it was time.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 02:27 am
Jarod KNEW. He knew it was her. Sometimes I can't believe you aren't a JMP shipper and then I read some of your other stories and can definitely believe it. Now I have to say the words. The sex part. OMG! You write it better than anyone!!!
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:18 am
I know you aren't a Jarod and Parker shipper but OH MY FREAKING GOD! This chapter title is The Missing Piece and the first chapter title is The Missing Piece. I thought Jarod was going to be the hero in A hero's heart and then I thought Kyle but now I see that it's Miss P! She's the one that rescue those girls getting herself in more danger and then being tortured ...i hope not raped.. but yeah, they are traffickers so she probably was if you're being honest.. I love that they made love and I love that she made the first move. Thank you. Thank you. Thanksgiving is early. I'm thankful for you Mirage.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 16/11/18 08:27 pm
Unexpected gifts from you.. You wrote two new chapters and an important scene. I knew you could do it. I didn't think you would do it but you have and you wrote Jarod and Parker's lovemaking very naturally.
I know you're opposed to the ship and you probably swore like a sailor the entire time you were writing this but I think you're listening to your muse and I hope you'll continue to do that. You seem comfortable writing erotica so that's probably helpful. You let it all happen naturally and I think Jarod must have realized that Parker needed this.. after fearing for her life I think they both needed the release.
This was beautiful and tragic. You know you can't end it here. It isn't marked complete and I hope that wasn't accidental on your part because it doesn't feel complete.
The scar means that Parker was slice essentially from head to toe? Is that true? We must know about the torture and other scars. I'm also curious. Was there foreshadowing during Jarod's thoughts about packing the lamiaria?
Because in an earlier chapter we learned that one of the traffickers was a paroled rapist. You've never cheated us on the details and I hope you won't start now. I'm relieved that all of the children were recovered and are safe and were unharmed. I'd like to see how Miss Parker on a witness stand plays out and how many attorneys she will beat up. Until next time Mirage... Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/11/18 08:34 pm
