She was never "lost to him only concealed." I never was on the ship. I liked the show for what it was and didn't think they'd end up together until that kiss that was interrupted by Ocee. I do like the history they share and you seem to pay homage to that repeatedly and I appreciate that so deeply. The way you put his memory back together, the way Little Miss Parker put those pieces back together for him was plausible and not some leap of logic pulled out of the air. There is plausibility is every line. I like that Jarod goes back even though he doesn't know why.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 02:11 am
Kyle's reaction is priceless. Ethan's observations are very telling here and it shows us Jarod's pain and panic. He's still concussed and clearly out of sorts. I'm glad he was able to pull it together finally.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:56 am
I was too stoked to log in. Can I get more of this please? So much to love here. Your characterisations are always spot on. The dialouge is brilliant. The writing is solid and good. Nothing seems forced. The story doesn't lag. It's intelligently written. The writing is mature. It's plausible. The reactions are perfect. The descriptive work is fantastic. This isn't fan fic. This is fiction plain and simple and I love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kayla, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/11/17 11:53 pm
"What the hell, Jarod"... that's definitely Kyle. Thank you for bringing him back and in a way that is more plausible than the heart donation storyline thing from the tv series because as a nurse I can tell you the heart isn't likely to be any good to anyone if it hasn't been perfused and the only way to do that is to keep the donor body on a respirator. Even with that, some hearts can't be used due to sepsis and other issues. Given what we saw on the show it's impossible that Kyle's heart would have been of any use. AS of now there are new devices that improve this, keeping the heart warm and monitoring the heart's vitals. When I first read your explanation for Kyle still being alive I screamed aloud because you got it right. I've been saying for years that the heart would have been medical waste. I think you probably have some medical training. Anyway the characters are just as I remember them except maybe wiser. You do a job good of developing them and also creating and developing your own original characters. I feel blessed to read you, blessed that this fandom has a Mirage to wow us. Thanks for being you and thanks from all of my heart for writing and sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Jameason, for reading and for the lovely review.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 18/11/17 07:28 pm
I conitinue to be impressed Mirage. I hope real life won't keep you away from us so long in the future. You are sorely missed. More, please?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about that. Sometimes real life will keep me away and it can't be helped. More will be posted soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/17 03:39 am
Oh . My... God... Mirage Mirage! I wish I knew a real name to call you by but Mirage is good too. Imma gonna second what Twisted said. I know you don't want us to say negative things about Craig and Steve... and I don't want to piss you off. Twisted is braver than I am so refer back to that review again. You need to be writing the official novels. Until you are I will keep considering your writing the official Pretender story. The clarity you write with and our ability to flesh out the characters...yeah, honey you've gone and outdone the creators. Keep writing please. I totally honesty love your writing style and stories even the more graphic ones. I am worried about Miss Parker... she's not dead is she? Oh god more please?!!
Author's Response:
Please don't speak that way about those men. Please. There are many things I should be doing or need to be doing but what I'm actually doing here is writing fan fic and it's not official and most of the time I revolve my eyes at what I've written and then shrug and publish it anyway. It is what it is. I don't believe I've outdone anyone. I'm not competing with anyone (except myself). I'm glad you're liking this but let's be realistic. Okay? Moving on. Miss Parker probably isn't dead but who knows? Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 12/11/17 08:06 pm
This reads like a murder (and it had better NOT be Miss Parker's murder) mystery. With a huge amount of humor injected (thanks to little Miss Parker tormenting Jarod).
I'm very keen to discover what happens next. I wish you could devote every waking hour to this (and all your fan fictions) but I realize you do have a life. It's enough that you write and update your stories frequently. Thank you for that!I
I remain very appreciative of your talent. I wish you were a Hollywood producer with millions of dollars so you could film an ending to the Pretender seriies. I still feel Craig and Steven should turn over the right to you since you are willing to keep Jarod and company alive!
Author's Response:
Aw thank you, Twisted, for reading and reviewing. You are extremely kind. I appreciate every review.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/11/17 12:58 am
More please! Oh godd girl you rock. Your writing is amazing!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Missy.
Reviewer: Missy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/17 11:15 pm
Oh yass! Honey every time I see that you've updated I scream and worry the neighbors and upset my pugs. Little Miss Parker always has had a smart mouth and I so love that she's still in character and still driving Jarod nuts. Ethan's POV of Jarod was really telling...that's when I knew how badly Jarod was handling Parker's abduction. I know he almost struck Rachel in the previous chapter but when his eyes are saying one thing and his mouth is saying something else...ahhh I love your words. Mirage thank you so much for writing and sharing your work. You keep the fandom alive and wow, those characterizations are so spot on! More, please?
Author's Response:
Thank you, Dark One.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/17 03:48 am
