Stunning chapter. Your chapter notes are hilarious by the way. It's refreshing and heartwarming to see Jarod carefully explain his disappearance and when his words failed the actions succeeded. It's telling. Again the closing words at the scene's ending are masterful. So profound. You leave me wanting more.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 12:03 am
Your chapter notes are hilarious!
"There's only one way to find out." He said flatly.
"Oh?" She purred. "And which way is that?" She inquired and then observed the impish grin curve his lips. Jarod answered simply:
"Trust me."
Love it.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 02:19 am
at least they didnt kill each othef.. but you know we all want mooore
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/17 05:49 pm
"indubitably" and "a pin to your inflated ego" are the best Parker lines of all time. I love Jarod's lines too. He doesn't get many good ones in the series of telefilms.
Chapter three still held the tension but now you introduce more plot and balance the story.
I applaud you.
Reviewer: Imogen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/08/13 07:37 pm
"presumably expendeble". I could tell my namesake was having trouble asking Miss Parker for anything and there is he showing the gun at that moment. They aren't going to kill each other now are they, Mirage? You scare me with your end notes.
Author's Response:
I scare you? Ha. I'll take that, J, as an enormous compliment. They aren't going to kill each other- but there's a story in that.
Reviewer: Jarod Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/08/13 05:15 am
Merci! My new favorite story! Keep the updates coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you, MlleParker, for reading and reviwing. The updates are coming.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/13 08:00 pm
Love it! As always, your writing style is terrific and the characters are perfect, they are just the way they are on the show. Thank you for continuing to share your talent with us. And that note...does that mean they are going to have sex? Please say yes! You write stellar sex scenes that are what I always imagined it would be like for Jarod and her to have sex...excluding the scary non-consent scenes in forces of nature and circles of hell. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Christoph. Um, sex? Oh, I don't know. Yet. "It's too soon to tell". Yes, probably. Ah, so you imagine him having sex? Haha. Right, we'll "pretend" those nonconsent stories do not exist. I will update soon.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/13 03:44 am
...She felt quite naked and vulnerable without her gun, and especially when she recalled the events that transpired the last time she'd worn a borrowed robe, sans gun)...
this reference to IOTH is AMAZING!
I was so looking forward for this update. Mirage I'm loving this one more than all your other stories, really! But pleeeease. Please. Let them have a happy ending, for once... These two have been through so much pain...they deserve it! Please!
Author's Response:
Thanks, missparker87. I'm so happy you liked the reference. There were quite a few telling moments in IOTH and they make it extremely difficult for anyone to deny a "connection"- even a diehard Parker-Thomas shipper like Mirage (and yet, I try). My muse will take your review into careful consideration. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/06/13 09:13 pm
--- "her hand still bore his touch, indiscernible to the eye; indelible as a scar"---
IS my new all time favorite line EVER from any story, poem, tv, or movie. It's plain she was affected in the limo..."nonplussed"... and I think their history and relationship....yeah! It would leave a permanent mark on them both. So wow. Damn! If only the marks and changes were visible to each other.. these two would have bypassed all the BS and been together years ago but the creators had other ideas. You know what? I like YOUR ideas much better! You've leveled things out in a single chapter and Jarod surely has a way of making his point but he did and these two are coming to an understanding. Don't you dare stop writing!
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for bestowing this lowly wannabe writer with such an honor. Right: who knows what will happen when the pretenses drop to the floor [insert audible crash]. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dark one.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/13 08:30 pm
I definetely hope for the former and not the latter! :-) Another great chapter in another great story. Truly you are the most prolific author on this site and my vote for writing the Pretender finale that Steven and Craig are obviously NEVER going to do.
Thanks as always for writing and even more important updating! it is always a pleasure to visit the site and discover a Mirage story and/or update! But PLEASE update 'Sweet Dreams'!! (Pretty please with sugar on top!)
Author's Response:
Thank you, twisted, for reading and reviewing. Ah, well, about that finale and Steven and Craig- mm, we may get our answers after all. But thank you. It's a huge compliment. I will be updating Sweet Dreams. Just for you! I only hope you like it.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/06/13 04:39 am
