Ah, fantastic, Leonie! I'm so glad you wrote AND posted your fic. It was a great read and it read very fast. Ooh, you nailed Lyle- gorgeous but so bad, haha. And you actually made me feel a bit sorry for poor Jarod (something that rarely happens). Also, I believe that no pretender fic is complete without the inclusion of some Brootsie, so yay, you! My only other thought is: Where will you take us next? I want to know what Miss Parker will do now, how well she'll interact with Baby Parker, if she'll evade the Centre permanently, and- well, you get the idea.