Reviews For Moxie
Title: Chapter 9

Need more. Please continue.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/08/13 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Ugh!  It as too short.  That's what I think!  I am enjoying the story. I'm intersted to see how Jarod works through where Parker could be. No one really had to find him, because he left clues, so it will be interesting to see how he would look for another Pretender.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Yeah me too :) I love their dynamic and I want to write that as soon as possible, but it would stupid if he found her so fast. I want to give her the credit, that she can hide from him for more than a few days.

 

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/13 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 8

I am thrilled that you haven't abandoned this story; I have missed it. And oooh, the plot thickens. What do I think? Well, Ithink you should write more, Leonie. And quickly. It's odd; I am unnaturally curious about Jarod (except when I'm writing about him haha) and his action/reactions (to the choices Parker has made) and that- - in of itself- - says something about your ability as an author- seriously, you've got that mysterious-Jarod-intrigue thing going on. *shudders* Nicely done.



Author's Response:

I have to thank you for your support, it really means a lot to me that so many people are reading this. One more is up now and I'm trying to write more this week :)

Even though Miss Parker has always been my favorite character, I love the whole bunch, so I will try to include all of them!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/01/13 06:21 am
Title: Chapter 8

Glad to see you're continuing your fic.  Are you going to post more chapters?  Can't wait



Author's Response:

Yes I am! I'll try to update tomorrow or the day after. Thanks for taking the time to read even though there are some mistakes :D

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/12 05:26 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Very good, Leonie. I love that Miss Parker gets to be a dancer and how comfortable she is raising a child. She may carry a gun and act tough but we've seen how maternal she can be on the show. I'm very curious about where you're taking us. Will Jarod find her soon? Hmm? And then what?

I'm not familiar with FF.com- *looking at that website now in a different window and not liking it * I love this darker theme so I really hope you'll continue to post here.

I completely understand delays in updating. Please, don't apologize for any mistakes, I saw none; I don't even see my own mistakes. *smiles* I'm looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Fanfiction.net is not for everybody. It's huge and you can find stories to a lot of series, but through that it's also very unpersonal...

I have just one assignment left and then I'll continue writing. Just got my head full right now :)

I think when it comes to her brother (or her own kids) Miss Parker wouldn't have any problems being a good mom.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I couldn't wait to read the other chapters, so I read them on fanfiction.net...
Please upload the other chapters on this site too!
Keep on writing!

Author's Response:

Maybe I shouldn't have mentioned it then ;)

But you are right, I'm gonna do that now and then quickly keep on writing.

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this!

Reviewers make me happy :-D

Reviewer: Aemilius Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 09:22 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Ah, fantastic, Leonie! I'm so glad you wrote AND posted your fic. It was a great read and it read very fast. Ooh, you nailed Lyle- gorgeous but so bad, haha. And you actually made me feel a bit sorry for poor Jarod (something that rarely happens). Also, I believe that no pretender fic is complete without the inclusion of some Brootsie, so yay, you! My only other thought is: Where will you take us next? I want to know what Miss Parker will do now, how well she'll interact with Baby Parker, if she'll evade the Centre permanently, and- well, you get the idea.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! I have already written 7 chapters in total, I'm gonna upload the next one today! I had it up on FF.com for some time now, but I like this page so much better^^
I don't know where it ends yet or even how long the story is going to be, but I will update regulary... or as regulary as a student can :)

By the way, I'm german, so please excuse any mistakes I made/will make!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 09:21 am


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