Oh yeah, you know what you're doing. You do it brilliantly.
Reviewer: Jana Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/24 10:46 pm
Noice!
I want more of this. I need a sequel.
Sequel!
Sequel!
Sequel!
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/20 12:20 am
I remember this gem fondly. It's a conclusion that isn't. I read both chapters and I would like to know how these two crazy people are doing together.
"Sorry, Jarod, no refunds. It's the Centre after all, not some over sized, monopolizing giant of a store. There were no customer service representatives waiting with artificial smiles to apologize for Jarod's unsatisfactory experiences." Perfect.
Reviewer: Xena Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/02/20 03:05 am
I don't know what to say. This was totally sweet and very hot but not cheesy. You never go overboard with the cheddar like too many other writers do.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/14 08:57 pm
I couldn't get away from this until I read the whole story:) It's so sweet and moving! Please, write more:)
Author's Response: Thank you, Kama, I will try to write more.
Date: 16/02/11 04:33 pm
I really rather enjoyed this! Hope you keep it going I would love to read more....but them again I am a shipper and you've just arrived at my favorite part LOL.....Next chapter???? Please? Pretty Please? With Sugar on top?
Author's Response: Thank you so much, aldysgal. I'm glad you enjoyed it and ahh, okay, I'll see if I can dream up a sequel. The "sugar on top" gets me every time.
Date: 16/02/11 06:39 am
You are very unpredictable. I like the violence, and the nice hurt/comfort quality to this fic and just how ballsy Jarod can be. You must write more.
Author's Response: Me? Unpredictable? No. Sometimes, I guess. I will try to write more. Thanks for the r&r, Dark Angel.
[Report This]Date: 15/02/11 10:40 pm
