uuuhhh...so exciting! really enjoyed this chapter. Finally he captures her,but doesn't hand her over to the authorities,or puts her into jail.Am really looking forward to find out what happened in D.C and who attacked her. How they found out that Syd is her father is another one that caught my curiosity. And the renewal-wing thing...oh just loving this! and who might be the leak,and why? this ready itself like a thriller.Just oh-so-great!
Keep on the beautiful work!!!
Can't wait for the sequel. :-)
-IceAngel
Author's Response: Hello IceAngel. The next update will explain the DC attack (at least some of it) and I will eventually be addressing the Sydney-Parker connection as well as some info about the Centre/renewal wing. The leak will be discovered a little bit later though. I'm still sorting it out and will update in a day or so. Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: 30/01/10 10:54 pm
terrific writing of course. I enjoy the fact that you are able to move through the story without giving away the direction it will go in next.
Nice dialogue and of course the plot is terrific. Lots of twists ant unexpected but fun turns.
Please keep writing. I love that I have this to look forward to besides your other story! Very skillfully done.
Thanks for continuing and posting.
Author's Response: Oh wow, it's always a pleasure to read these reviews and I'm always speechless afterwards. I will definitely keep writing. Thank you so much nightowl. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/01/10 09:38 pm
This story is bloody brilliant! Want more!!!!! I love every moment of it, and the way each character has evolved without being out of character! This could definitely be the third movie we're all still waiting for! My congratulations!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Faith! You will definitely get more- with a review like that, I simply have to continue. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30/01/10 12:22 pm
Amazing new chapter and it's turning into quite an intriguing mystery-suspense with this forth chap which is as exciting as an episode of TP, more so. As an LPN, I appreciated the medical aspect which I found to be spot on accurate, Jarod is great as a doctor and I'm so glad to see the characters are just as I remember. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Hi Miss Ice Queen. I'm shooting for a much nicer Jarod with this fic. (hard to tell, I know) I'm happy it worked for you! Thanks so much for the r & r, I hope to update today or tomorrow.
Reviewer: Miss Ice Queen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/10 06:40 am
I just got back from a 2 week stint in very rural Australia, so this was a GREAT welcome back present! Another chapter of Forces of Nature would make my day even more...(hint hint!) :D
I love the originality of this story. Nice twist with Nicholas' relationship to MP. And base jumping?? That girl just knows everything! Excellent flow and pace. Very excited to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Oh, well welcome back. I'm glad you like the story Fe, hope to update soon. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: fe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/10 01:21 pm
That must of been one freaking long ladder she was climbing, but I'll let you away with it cause it's such an exciting, intense story and cause I forgave the original writers for that ridiculously inaccurate diabetes episode. Keep it up, you've got us all on the edge of our seats!
Author's Response:
Hi ND! You'll let me get away with it? Well that's nice but I already have. ;-) The beauty of fiction is that we can unleash our muses on these helpless characters and get away with it. Some things are unbelievable (adult male virgin, inner sense) and some we don't like but it's fiction and it's not worth anyone getting their knickers in a twist over. :-)
That said, I try not to stray too far into the magical poppies.
No, the building is not terribly tall and yes, I realize that while it is a very exhilarating hobby, base jumping from such altitudes is a very quick way to die.
I shall reveal all in the coming chapters. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ND Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/01/10 08:23 am
Oh-my-GOOOD!
Just loooove your stories! sssooo exciting to read and keeps me begging for more. :-)
Really enjoy this one here,'cause it's a concept I haven't read so far anywhere else...veeery intriguing. *thumbs up*
Interesting idea to make MP and nicholas siblings...hmmm,so that would make good old Syd her father..? Can't wait to get to know more about that. Am also wondering who's trying to let her look like a murderer.Maybe baby-brother Lyle? hehehe.
Oh and btw loved the little piece of Lyle's thoughts about "having her" when the cops infiltrated the Centre.
So keep on the good work!
Author's Response:
Hi IceAngel. Yes, Syd gets be MP's dad in this fic and you may be right about baby brother...don't know yet where it's going.
Thanks so much..
Reviewer: IceAngel Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/01/10 04:46 pm
just read all three chapters and i am so lookign forward to the next. You kept everyone in chaacter love that nicolas is her brother and this is all very possible love this story please dont keep us waiting too long
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/10 01:27 pm
Wow, wow, wow, that was so freakin' intense and just so parker and jarod, post more
Author's Response: Thanks julia!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/10 11:03 am
Hi that was a good chapter can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thanks Katecats.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/10 07:01 am
Wow. what a chapter, I certainly didn't have a chute for that ending either. You leave so many threads blowing in the wind..so many unanswered questions,mysteries and mazes. Simply wonderfully done.
Very creative, giving nothing away and yet there are clues, I'm not sure exactly where they lead to.. it's like have a 1,000 piece puzzle but no idea what the pieces are to be once they are put together. great writing, suspense and myster abound.
Skillfully told, I hope you have the next chapter close to ready for posting! I will be looking for it!
Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it more than chocolate, well tonight! ;-)
Author's Response:
Hi nightowl, I don't even know how to respond to such wonderful reviews. I feel so unworthy..your reviews are better than my stories..:-) (No I'm serious!)
The next chapter is in the works. Thanks so much!
I've left you a review by the way. Please update your story...
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/10 03:07 am
You are back in full force!!! This chapter was very dark and intense and i really like it!
Author's Response: There may be more 'dark and intense' in the coming chapters, haven't got it all sorted out just yet. Thanks so much dimana!
Date: 07/01/10 02:00 pm
Way cool, J runing around with his head cut off, P in control, but Who is after her? Why?
Author's Response:
yeah, J with his head cut off...always good. The answer is coming. Next chapter.
Thanks so much janeway
Reviewer: janeway Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/09 09:45 pm
So well written and plotted. Now the title fits in perfectly. Great job writing and plotting out the chapters. You are on with this one too.
Writing seems to be a true skill for you, I hope you continue to sharpen your skill (not that I can find anything wrong with it) and as always continue to share it with people that enjoy your work.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks nightowl! You always manage to render me speechless. I will try to sharpen my skill (lack of) and yes, it needs improvement. I want to thank you again for the reviews and all of the support. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/12/09 04:18 am
I like it ! Please finish Forces of Nature too!
Author's Response: Thank you Nicola. I will update this fic as soon as I can. Just updated Forces of Nature. Thanks for R and R!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/09 09:38 am
I like this new adventure of our favorite couple! Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Hi dimana. Thanks so much. I will try to update soon. Thanks again!
Date: 09/12/09 07:34 pm
Wow. I absolutely LOVE the plot. Love the way the tables have been turned. Parker on the run, leaving Jarod with all the questions this time. What a nice change! I'm very curious as to who is after Parker if Lyle is indeed dead (of course, no one ever really dies at the Centre). It's too early in the story for me to begin speculating but darn it if I'm not already doing just that. LOL! Love your writing style and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you TessaD. I'm glad you're liking it so far. I will update as soon as I possibly can. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 09/12/09 03:42 pm
Amazing once again!!! I loved it! I love the fact that Jarod is confused as hell, and that he reacts in such a way to Parker being called 'his girl'...
And we've seen Parker, yippee! (wasn't sure at first whether she would be half-absent in this fic)
Hope for them to meet soon (even if Parker goes away after, just for the sake of having them snarl at each other!!!) Just keep writing and makes us happy : post a new chapter soon!!!
(just to clarify for Mr X : Green is the surname given to Sydney by the NBC which first aired the show, when they made a synopsis of the TV show... (they even gave Jarod a surname at first, telling that the fisrt one he uses, Russel, was the actual one) Anyway, the name Green was never actually used in the show... And you know the rule : you either have a first name or a surname!!! (except for Catherine Parker or Edna Raines, but they're dead after all....) Voilà!
Author's Response: Hi Faith! Wow! I'm glad you love it, really wasn't sure how well this would be received. I like Jarod much better when he doesn't know what the hell is going on. Much less cocky that way. There will be more of that to come, I hope. I think they just might meet in the next chapter. Just for you. Hopefully I can make everyone happy. Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review as well as the extra dash of clarity...can never have too much of that. Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 09:12 am
After reading this last chapter, there are a thousand questions going through my mind. I am confused in a good way!
I am happy this comes in chapters otherwise I would just keep reading en loose my sleep. But please update soon because the wait is killing me.
Author's Response: Hello Eden. Hopefully, the story will all come together in upcoming chapters. I will update as soon as possible. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 09:06 pm
Glad you've updated. Loving your take of the hunter/hunted turn about.
Author's Response: Hi ballpoint, thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/09 10:54 am
definitely intriguing premise, but there's one thing: Sydney was Sydney Green, not De Wilde; and Broots' first name was never told, so he's just Broots.
And why the hell did you have to have Parker raped!? Was it really that necessary?
Author's Response:
*pops in to sprinkle a little clarity dust*
Hello "X",
I didn't and it wasn't! The actual term I used was "attack" and no where in THIS story will you read that the "attack" was sexual in nature. (It was NOT) Try to refrain from jumping to conclusions and accusing me of writing something that I did NOT write. I'm not fond of accusations and some might view it as an "attack". ;-)
Moving on to your "other things".
I am well aware that some choose to give Sydney the name Green/Greene and leave Broots as simply "Broots' in their stories and that's wonderful but here's the thing: This is MY story! I will bloody well write whatever the hell I choose.
Are we clear?:-)
Thank you so much for reading and for the review. Feedback can be very helpful at times. I think it's great that the "premise" works for you.
Reviewer: Mr. X Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 06:18 pm
i like it.Parker on the run, J clueless. You should write more.
Author's Response: Thank you Janeway. I'm so glad you like it. More is in the works. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/09 09:50 am
more please
this is very interesting and I like the twist of the hunted becoming the hunter
Author's Response: Thanks anonymous, more is on the way. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/11/09 03:29 pm
Hi That was good please keep the story going.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Katescats! (nice name btw)
[Report This]Date: 28/11/09 09:01 am
Ok, now I am curious!!
Loved it and it read like a train.
Forget about editing it, it's as good as it gets. No need for changes.
Like you always say, forgive me for the typo's
Author's Response:
Thank you Eden. That's a relief. I often don't proof and sometime later, I'll find rampant typos thoughout the story, which I hate. Anyway, I'm so glad you like it and I will leave it as is.
Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review.
Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/09 11:58 pm
