I can't get enough of this story! You have a knack for keeping it flowing and the audience sitting on the edge of their seats. There is a touch of Jill Kirby's style of writing here. And it is good to see it back, if not by the real JK then by someone with the same keen insight and skill at writing.
Good work. I had a not so great day so this was very nice to find tonight. Thank you.
Please by all means continue.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/08/09 04:44 am
Wonderful third chapter! One of the better things I've read lately ( and I read very much!), your style is amazing and I'm loving it very very very much!
Miss P the haunted? It's fantastic! And the way you wrote her thoughts...I nearly cried when she stopped her tears in front of Ethan...Loved it!!! Please post more soon, don't stop, don't left this incomplete!
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 11:07 pm
I second what "nightowl" said - your writing is a lot like Jill Kirby's and that is an awesome thing. I really, REALLY hope you continue this!
Author's Response: Thanks Taryn, it's great to hear you're enjoying it. More to come very shortly!
[Report This]Date: 18/07/09 05:19 am
Argh! (yes argh) I hate cliff hangers! This was another fantatic chapter Fe. I simply can't wait to read more...and soon.
Author's Response: Haha thanks Mirage, I couldn't resist a good cliff hanger! Working on the next chapter now, should be ready to post very soon...
Date: 17/07/09 05:47 am
Oh, now you have to continue!! perfect cliff hanger! and I really hate cliff hangers!
You did a great job of setting it up, the whole way great job. Your writing reminds me a lot of some Pretender stories by Jill Kirby. That is a good thing she was a very good writer with interesting insights into the emotions between P and J.. you did the same type of writing.
The emotions between them would be powerful and you captured an avenue that they take. You also made Lyle as creepy as i've always found him.
Good work I hope you find time to continue with more soon.
Thank you for that .
Author's Response: Thanks so much nightowl. Wow, I'm flattered that you would even compare me to Jill Kirby, she's an amazing writer. You've made my day! Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/07/09 03:53 am
Mmmh...what a angst...but really well written. I like very much your style. Go on please.
Author's Response: Thanks loveyoujar. I forewarned lots of angst and there will be plenty more to come! Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/07/09 11:31 pm
This was very good! I like this chapter much more than the last one. I'm courious about more and remain hoping for a happy end for Jarod and Miss Parker in the end!
Author's Response: Thanks anon, glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Date: 15/07/09 07:14 pm
awesome chapter, I loved everything about it. keep on posting!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, much appreciated! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/07/09 05:46 pm
i like it !
please, update soon !
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, eve! Reviewer: eve Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 10/07/09 03:11 pm
Of course you should continue this, after all, all we have are the writings of each other to keep the Pretender story alive. And there isn't one fan that wouldn't like to see a continuance of the series.
You have a nice start, emotional but due to the way that movie ended it would have to be wouldn't it?
Well written. Please continue. We may each have ideas how it would continue but that is what fanfic is about sharing those different ideas.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and all your encouragement nightowl! Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 10:28 pm
Fantastic chapter Fe! The story is begging to be continued. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks Mirage! Really appreciate you taking the time to read and review :)
Date: 06/07/09 10:27 pm
Loving it! Very well written, very dark. Just perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your kind words! Much appreciated :) Reviewer: Miss Shannon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 08:51 pm
I liked this very much. Very well written ...please can we have some more from you! Congratulations.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Phoebe!
Date: 06/07/09 02:19 pm
WOW!!! Welcome to the site! (Sorry for my english)
Your story is amazing, very well written and so realistic. It's one of the better post IOTH I've read!
What do you mean you don't know if this will stay a one shot? Are you kidding? It's too good, you HAVE to write a sequel for us lonely, sad and frustrated Jarod/Parker's fan!!!!!
Please.....
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next part is on its way, I couldn't help myself :) Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 01:20 pm
