Awesome story! I loved all your insights into all the characters, switching POVs. Thomas redeemed himself slightly by sacrificing himself to save Miss P, which was good. Love the name Mischa for her. =)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/10 07:25 am
Another favorite! Lyle sections were amusing. Interesting background fill ins on how things came to be. Great Catherine possibilities on what her talent possessed. Cool twist on Thomas story. I've always wondered how far the Centre maneuvered everything.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/01/10 03:52 am
That was a good story. Thank you for sharing. I do have a question though. How did Miss Parker miss Thomas having a heartbeat when she checked on him. Glad that the Centre is gone and everyone was okay after it.
Author's Response:
Hi Ann,
sorry, I seem to have just missed replying to your review earlier. :-)
I don't really know. The reason was Parker's distress, probably, or some sort of medication that affected Thomas' vital signs.
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 08:21 pm
