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Title: Sleeping With The Enemy ?

Thank you and your muse for this emotional part!Can't wait to find out what is going on next!

Author's Response:

Hi dimana, thank you for reading and for the lovely review. I can't wait to find out either. I hope to have the next chapter up in a few days.

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/01/09 11:35 am
Title: Stormfront

Poor Jarod and Parker ...so close yet they are still so far apart.  I liked this chapter very much.  Please keep writing - you have a great style which is easy to read.

I like the plot ...even though you are not sure where you are taking us!  I'm sure you will continue to surprise us!!

Thank you! 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Phoebe! A cat named Jasper. Nice! 

I'm glad you're liking the story ...*so far* and I'm pleased that you find my writing easy to read.

The plot? Well, let's just say I'm not sure where this story is taking me at the moment. Even so, the next chapter will up very soon. 

Thank you for taking the time to comment. 

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 02:10 pm
Title: While You Were Sleeping

Fantastic chapter ... love it even more because I have a cat called Jasper!   More please - soon!

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/08 07:37 pm
Title: The Downward Spiral

WANT MORE!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

You'll get more.

The next chapter is almost finished. 

Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/08 08:02 pm
Title: The Downward Spiral

I have to say that this chapter was far too short. I found myself wanting to read more when I hit the bottom of the page.:)

 I am really into this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for that lovely review anamchara! I'll try to make the next chapter a little longer. Again, thanks.

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/08 12:32 am
Title: The Twilight Zone

Lovely second chapter... 10 days together, huh? I'm not sure Jarod and Miss Parker will both survive the confinement, but they seem to be making progress... Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Thanks middleman! Ten days is a worst case scenario....you know, I'm not certain that they will both survive the ordeal either. I'll update soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. 

 

 

Reviewer: middleman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/11/08 07:02 pm
Title: Stormfront

This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter - please update soon!  I love the quick come-backs from Miss P ... so in character.  Congratulations!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for Phoebe. I became so engrossed reading your story (and the other great stories here and at the data annex) that I almost forgot about mine. The update is coming.

Thanks again for reading. 

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/11/08 09:07 pm
Title: The Twilight Zone

Well, lets just say that I can't wait for the next chapter, because I want the answers concerning the dream she had. Great story! Dying for more:) There were simple errors like a sentence not making sense because of a missing word, stuff like that.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading anamchara! I type faster than I think but still, my errors are inexcuseable. 

I'm glad you like it and hopefully you'll get those answers soon.  (RL is insane at the moment.)

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/11/08 12:41 am
Title: Stormfront

Awesome story! Miss Parker and Jarod, trapped in another blizzard together! Juicy. Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the very kind review anamchara. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 02:50 pm
Title: Stormfront

Very nice begining, I hope you'll post the sequel soon!!

Author's Response: I will update soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 12:45 am
Title: Stormfront

Lovely beginning! I like both your very calculating, two-steps-ahead-of-everyone Jarod and your professional Miss Parker. Can't wait to read where you are taking us with this fic... Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks middleman! I was hoping these two very complex characters came across the way I intended them to. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 06:00 pm
Title: Stormfront

this story is really good...i hope jarod has to look at her arm himself...they are so cute together...keep going and please update soon

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will update soon.

Reviewer: blublbulb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/11/08 12:12 am
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