Mr Cox? Now that's unforeseen! And very exciting!!!!
Still reading, still enjoying your story immensely, just got a bit sloppy about the whole reviewing part of things...
Great job, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hi Middleman!
I'm so pleased you are still reading! I'm glad you liked the surprise of Mr Cox - I've always thought he was such an undervalued character and a real 'outsider' - I like to think that Jarod might have got along with him under different circumstances. (I know Mr Cox is a bit creepy but I can forgive him that!).
There are a couple more chapters to come (I think) and I'm hoping for a happy ending! Thanks again for staying with me on this!
Reviewer: middleman Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/08 04:59 pm
Great update! Lots of drama and suspence but i hope there will be a happyend!
Author's Response: Hey dimana - I'm so pleased to hear from you and that you are hanging in there with the story! I think there will be two more chapters and yes, I'm hoping for that happy ending .....I couldn't do anything less!!! I rather think it is going to be in Parker's hands. Thanks again, it's much appreciated.
Date: 06/12/08 09:21 am
Great chapter!
The only criticism is that I notice the characters call Mr. Raines, "Old man Raines" and I don't think he was ever called that in the series and I would think they would just call him Mr. Raines. But, its your story.
I can't wait for another chapter! I like the fact that Cox is teaming with Jarod. Interesting twist, seeing as one would think they would never get together considering they are supposed to be rivals.
Great job!
Author's Response: Hello anamchara ...thanks for staying with me on this. Yes, you are absolutely right. Mr Raines was never referred to as "old man Raines" - that's just a bit of literary licence of my part .... how I think Lyle might have referred to him. I also like to think, had the circumstances been different, that Jarod might have got along with Mr Cox (even though Mr Cox is a bit creepy!) I'm very pleased to have your comments .... thank you! Next chapter will be soon ..... I'm enjoying writing this so much. Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/12/08 04:41 am
