Great story so far. Lyle really is insane. And bad luck for MP and Jarod that he chose that moment to go check on her. Here's hoping for more, soon. ;-)
Author's Response: Hey Whashaza ! Thanks for staying with the story - so glad you enjoyed chapter 6. I like to think chapter 7 is even better - but I will let you be the judge (my fingers are crossed!!!) Thanks again.
Date: 30/11/08 07:26 am
I'm so glad you posted again and so soon. Can't wait to read how MP and J will find a way out.Thank you for this great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review - yes, there are a few surprises to come! Chapter 7 is on it's way! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/11/08 09:46 am
I love this cliff hanger!!! More please!!! I like how Sydney was acting like he was there to save Parker and wanted to know why Lyle thought Jarod was coming. Hilarious! Acting all innocent. I predict that Ethan will come in and help the situation some how. Great work!
Author's Response: Hey Anamchara! Thanks for your lovely review!!! I'm happy to say that there are a few BIG surprises coming in the next chapter. So glad you are staying with the story. As I'm English, it is quite difficult to think 'American' but I'm having so much fun with my favourite characters. Thanks again!!
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