Very interesting story so far. Looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this. I'm having so much fun writing it.
Date: 18/11/08 09:07 am
Very interesting plot, I hate it when you get to the end of what is posted and want more!
Very well written, nice mystery and suspense woven into inter relationships. I like the way you captured each character and obviously look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you, nightowl, for a very generous review - coming from the author of The Human Condition - it's a great compliment! Thanks again. Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 16/11/08 01:54 am
Hey Phoebe! Somehow I missed chapter 3, so today I had two chapters waiting for me and that was a really nice surprise!
You're doing a really good job with this story so far, the scenes with Miss parker are my favourite!
Impatiently waiting for chapter 5,
marion.
Author's Response: Hi Marion - thank you for reviewing and I'm so pleased you are enjoying this - chapter 5 is coming very soon and there are a few surprises in store! This is my first ever story and a review from an experienced writer is very much appreciated. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 15/11/08 06:57 pm
