Reviews For The Homecoming
Title: Chapter 3
Author's Response: How kind of you to take the time to give me some constructive feedback. I cannot tell you how much it is appreciated! I really love the characters of Sydney, Jarod, Miss P and Lyle. Realistically, the relationships WILL be difficult outside the Centre but I'm hoping for a happy ending! Chapter 4 is coming very soon and ..... things start to hot up! Thank you again. Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous
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Date: 11/11/08 05:15 pm
This is interesting. I would have thought Sydney would have been supported, but the otherside of me cheers because of it.
I am glad you didn't make it all perfect by just having Sydney say that he was happy for Jarod, but that you made him sort of against it and see it realistically.
Although that doesn't mean I don't want to see Miss Parker and Jarod together, it just makes it interesting. :) Great job! I can't wait to read more:)
Author's Response: How kind of you to take the time to give me some constructive feedback. I cannot tell you how much it is appreciated! I really love the characters of Sydney, Jarod, Miss P and Lyle. Realistically, the relationships WILL be difficult outside the Centre but I'm hoping for a happy ending! Chapter 4 is coming very soon and ..... things start to hot up! Thank you again. Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/11/08 05:15 pm
