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Title: Chapter 2

Hey Phoebe!

Jarod and Sydney together, huh? very promising start as they have never really been alone together... Never away from the Centre cameras, that is, which forced their officially non-existent relationship to lie undercover, hidden beneath unfinished sentences, pregnant pauses, meaningful looks and double-entendres... Can't wait to see how they will adjust to the possibility of openness and honesty, to the intimacy of being on the run together...

Looking forward to chapter 3!

Author's Response: Thank you!  You are right, their relationship has always had to be undercover otherwise the Centre would have used it against them.  Chapter 3 gives Sydney more to think about than just Jarod - chapter 3 is coming soon.  Thanks for staying with it.

Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 10:40 pm
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