I loved the idea of Parker being kidnapped by Lyle. Jarod is always so protective towards her also during the show (thinking about "Bank" or "Keys"). I'm sure he'd get mad if someone Kidnapped her, especially Lyle! I loved this story, great lines and nice dialogues between Jarod and Sydney! Thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read my story and I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Although we no longer receive the reruns of The Pretender in France (where I live) I get huge enjoyment from watching the DVD's. All the characters are fantastic and there will never be another series to equal it. I keep thinking about writing a sequel to this one ... perhaps one day. Again, my thanks for your kind comments.
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/11/12 11:45 pm
I just returned from the annual holiday headache (I'm never flying again!!) and was thrilled to find the last installment to a wonderfully written story.
Great Job! I thoroughly enjoyed it. The happy ending was *perfect*. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Hi Mirage! Thank you for staying with the story! Yes - you will fly again!!!
I just couldn't say no to a "happy ending" - we were denied it with the TV series and the films - so we have to make up for it! I think there will be a sequel ....soon! Thanks again. I'm looking forward to more stories from YOU! Thanks again.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 30/12/08 11:00 pm
Wow! This was a great start, beautifully written with lovely descriptions. I could see Jarod on the beach, even imagine the look on his face as he stared up at the Centre. Very evocative. Read like it could have been the next movie (only better). Very interested to see where you go on this.
Author's Response: Hi Jacci! Thank you very much for such a generous review! It is much appreciated. The next movie, huh? We would be so lucky!!!! That's the stuff dreams are made of!! Chapter 6 is coming soon. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 24/11/08 01:30 am
This story is getting better with every chapter!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hello dimana ! Thanks for reviewing! It is so appreciated! I think this story is going to be an epic but I'm hoping to reunite Jarod and Parker very soon! Many thanks! Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 08:50 pm
Hey Phoebe! Great story, very well written and I love the mystery..can't wait to see where you're taking us!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mirage, for a great review. It's much appreciated. I'm having so much fun writing this! Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/11/08 02:40 am
Interesting story. I wonder who has Miss Parker?
Only another chapter will tell.:)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read my first chapter - this story is turning into an epic but the second chapter is coming very soon. Again, many thanks. Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/10/08 07:56 pm
Good beginning. I really liked the first part, when Jarod reflects upon his ties to the centre. And I loved the fact that in your world Jarod has found -all- his family at last and has had some quality time with them all. Which makes his decision to walk away from the centre (ie sydney and miss parker) even more heart-wrenching. It's one family for another, really, no?
Looking forward to see Jarod and Sydney working together!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review - I have always been fascinated by the relationship between Jarod and Sydney - as you so rightly say, one family for another ? They are such great characters with a unique relationship. Second chapter is coming very soon. Thank you again.
Date: 27/10/08 11:12 pm
