Just lovely! I loved this chapter! i think Jarod was right to push her in the situation where she has to tell ben... i'm hoping for another try from Jarod to make parker see his feelings for her, and hers for him! next chapter soon i hope!!! keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. There may be another try from Jarod in the not distant future. Your words of support are appreciated. I will finish this thing. (Eventually.)
Date: 11/11/08 02:00 pm
Intriguing and addictive, I hope you are working on the next chapter soon.
I like the mulitple plots and subplots, it takes a bit of skill to keep all the balls in the air at once.
Author's Response:
I am working on the next chapter.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/10/08 09:26 pm
Well done, powerfully written and interesting plot.
Thank you for the diverson of reading this rather than watching the debates.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Oh, and you're welcome.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/10/08 04:20 am
This story is getting better and better - it certainly is fast-paced and action-packed !!!
I really like where you are taking us and I hope that you will update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/10/08 08:33 pm
Hi! Your story goes so fast! Wow, I cannot follow it, but it is very good. I love the dialogues. Keep the good work.
Author's Response:
You're right, I wrote some of this years ago and was extremely busy at the time but I'm currently updating the rest of it and I'm trying to slow it down.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: lucitana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/10/08 02:49 pm
Very interesting story. I can't believe Sydney and Miss Parker would be so quick to buy Lyle's story and believe the worst of Jarod.
Looking forward to more.......
Author's Response:
Yes, but seeing is believing. (sometimes anyway)
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: jeanneb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/10/08 11:55 pm
Great start to this story. I liked it. Is Jarod going to tell Sydney and Miss Parker that it's Gemini that's killing the people and not him? Will they belive him when he does? Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I just updated with the answers to those questions. I hope you're not too disappointed.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/09/08 04:05 am
I am enjoying this story very much and I hope that you will continue with it soon. Your ideas are very refreshing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your very kind comments.
[Report This]Date: 29/09/08 07:04 pm
Hey Mirage,
I think this story is really good!
I liked the mystery about Jarod being a killer and also the way Ms. Parker handles the situation
xxx
LS
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Reviewer: LS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/09/08 07:17 pm
