Oooohh those encounters Parker has with Jarod are always so intense just like watching the show all over again wow god. I got chill bumps all over me and I shiver. So amazing. Lyle is so bad. I need more.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/10/20 03:53 am
OH. OH! I've never read this one. How have I never read this one. I read somewhere in your review responses to other stories that you didn't like this ... why on earth not? It's fantastic. A new new to me something to read by you. Yah!
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/20 03:40 am
Yayayay!! I'm happy dancing. SO look at you go with a happy ending and ... no sex but I didn't even miss the sex until I read your notes at the finale there about slamming on the brakes. You didn't even describe the kiss that happened after they waited for the interruption that didn't come thank GOD! Seriously that Ocee sending Jarod in and then not letting him kiss her.I like the way you played that out.
So you called yourself a nonwriter. Girl please get real. You are an author .You are my FAVORITE author. I got you above Stephen King on my favorite author's list. You're in the top five with Jane Austen, Mary Shelley, Margaret Atwood and Charlotte Bronte. So stop talking down yourself because you're insulting me because I love your writing. I'd like a sequel to this. It's amazing. It's one of your best pieces. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:31 am
So... I didn't that one coming woman. Jarod's real father. But that does make sense the more I think about it. Wow. Ahhh that last line. I love how she jokes about the PTA and minivans, caving to a life she never really wanted but can't resist because she loves that little boy. She has a big heart. I love this.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:22 am
Parker's all bad ass regardless of what happened. YES! So I'm binge reading all things Mirage tonight if you didn't read my other reviews so I hope you don't get too upset when you see all of these reviews. But you deserve them. This story is totally amazing.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:18 am
ohh the Centre's gone. That is awesome. I like that Jarod wants her to remember things on her own as a way to measure how she's healing. That's so in character for Jarod. I love that Jarod interupted her pity party and went into the bathroom. It's good to see take the initiative sometimes you know?
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:16 am
Yes. Jarod should have maybe let Parker kill Lyle. Brilliant writing, storytelling. I love how in character they consistently are when you write them. Ahhhh Mirage.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:12 am
Lyle's sarcastic barbs are hilarious and spot on even if it cruel and evil and so so bad. Nicely played by Jarod. He is a pretender and he nailed it. YOU nailed it m'dear.
I will never stop seeing Jarod drag angry Parker away from kicking the sh!t out of Lyle. Jarod had to physically stop her. Best. Scene. Ever.
I don't blame her at all.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:10 am
Oh no. But she did do everything Lyle said she did. But damnnn I hate how rough they are being with her. But it's Lyle. Sheesh. Harsh. Excellent writing, characters, descriptions as always.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 06:07 am
Brilliant Mirage. Why do you never talk about this story? Self promote already. I love this. You know how to keep all of the balls in the air and it's so mysterious.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 05:58 am
ermagherd I can't believe I have never read this. First chapter makes me know I'm in for a hell of a ride.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/20 05:45 am
WOW!!!! That was a great story.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/14 09:37 am
One of your best. This final chapter is amazing and all the conversation between J and Ms Parker are! Great work!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/11/12 03:26 pm
A very good story indeed. For a minute there I thought Parker wouldn't sit still. She seemed to be zipping every which way. Nice twists on who's father was who. Too bad her actual twin really died. For these two characters a life together is a given. Another talented storyteller here as well as a good writer.
Author's Response: Thank you electricq! :-)
[Report This]Date: 25/02/10 09:15 pm
I'm on chapter one now and it's greeaat as are your other stories hon. MissP is totally in character, hell on wheels as usual. You really have a talent and I'm glad you decided to use it on this fandom!
Author's Response:
Hi jade, I've been considering giving this thing a serious make over. I especially dislike the cheesy ending (and if I "change the story" ...) and it may change before your very eyes. With each chapter, the story itself got lost in translation as it left my mind and entered the hard drive. I have no excuse for it.
With all that said, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: jade Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/01/10 12:44 am
This is a great story, not as dark as the other one but it's wonderful with its own twists. Nice.
Author's Response: The last thing I expected was another review for this wreck of a story. Thanks tpfan, this was poorly written (can't recall what I was drinking in those days) and regrettable, just another end or beginning, ..thanks for r and r.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/09 02:22 am
Loved the technicalities. Heteropaternal Superfecundation....
Lyle is her twin but is only her half brother. Weird! Loved the whole thing and I'm glad you didn't rush them off to bed. Other than just how fast one of the chapters went, the story was great.
Author's Response: Heteorpaternal Superfecundation- love the way that rolls off the tongue. Glad you liked it. No, I didn't rush them off to bed because one, I am the worst at writing sexual acts and two, it seemed way too soon for them..well, for her. Yes, this was a rush job and not only my first multi chapter fic but my first fic of any kind. I didn't know what I was doing and now...well, I still DON'T know what the hell I'm doing. :-) Thanks for reading! Reviewer: kelli Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/09 02:09 am
First let me say that you are a writer. You write therefore you are a writer.
And I enjoyed your story very much, and hope that you will continue to write and to share. It's fanfiction you won't earn a dime (at least not that I know of) so you have nothing to lose.
I hope you continue to exercise that creative gene and to continue to share your storytelling efforts with us.
as for typos, I, of course, saw none. That's why I'm the typo queen. ;-) seriously keep writing.
Author's Response:
I'm certain that I will never earn a cent but I have really enjoyed "changing the story" of the Centre.
I'm astounded by your review. 'The Human Condition' was the very first piece I read when I joined here and is still one of my favorites. You are a celebrity to the world of fanfic and to know that you've enjoyed this wreck of story is...well, I'm speechless.
Thanks for the kind words of encouragament. You're right. Nothing to lose so of course I will continue to write and maybe even be brave enough to share.
You are not the typo queen. If you've had any typos at all, your story was so good that I failed to notice them. I'm the real typo queen.;)
Again, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 04:34 am
Wow ....what an ending! Thanks for a lovely Christmas present! This was a superb story and I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed it! Good plot, lots of action and a wonderful ending - what more could we ask for?
Happy Christmas, Mirage!
Author's Response:
Thanks Phoebe. That is quite a compliment coming from the author of 'The Homecoming'. (Great piece.)
Your glowing reviews have been exremely encouraging. I can't tell you just how rewarding it is to know that you've enjoyed the story. I wasn't going to share this with anyone; it's reviews like yours that make me glad I did. Thanks so much for reading and your kind reviews.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/12/08 11:15 am
"I'll leave them happy, hopeful and most importantly, clothed. "
And thank you very much for that; what a refreshing change...Nice touches -- the ending many of us hoped for although coming from a different path (Mr. Parker Jarod's father, Nate not Parker and Jarod's son, etc.)
I think this is a perfect way to end it; we have answers and enough to let our imaginations fill in the rest.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the lovely review Kelly Ann. I was hoping the readers wouldn't be too disappointed that P & J did not sleep together. I never intended this to be a romantic piece but it occured to me that on some level, she does care for him so I made several alterations to the story. In the end though, I thought it would be best to let the individual reader decide how P & J spent the evening.
Again, thanks for reviewing and thanks so much for reading.
Reviewer: Kelly Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/12/08 06:17 am
more more more more more!!! i want more! it's such a good story! I almost cried when Jarod whispered "Never"... that's beautifully written! keep going!
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor guy. I'm going to make him work for the happy ending he wants.
Thanks for reading and for the very kind reviews that I know I don't deserve.
Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 06:01 pm
If there were typo's ...I never saw them!
Wonderful chapter - I've just put my handkerchief away!
Please tell me there is a happy ending!!! I can hardly bear to read the next chapter in case it isn't so!
Absolutely loved it!!!
Author's Response:
I think I can possibly manage one happy ending for these two.
Thanks for reading Phoebe and for that lovely review. I'm so unworthy but I appreciate it just the same.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/12/08 02:02 pm
Hey Mirage! I loved this chapter. Edge of the seat stuff!
You have captured their characters so well. I can't wait for your next update. Thanks for a great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks Phoebe! I'm glad you like it.
I attempted to do justice to their characters and I hoped I haven't failed them. I'm not so sure about that though.
Still, I appreciate the comment and your kind words of encouragement.
The next chapter is almost complete. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 07:20 pm
I love your style and the story is really good, more please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks lo000!
Date: 03/12/08 07:12 am
Please can we have the next chapter soon!!!!
This chapter was pure magic!! More please!!!
Author's Response:
Next chapter is up.
*blushes* Magic? I don't know about that Phoebe but I appreciate the comment just the same. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/11/08 08:59 pm
