Title: Chapter 1

Very nice and insightful.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 12:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting how you put together a type of thought process for Parker using her experiences dealing with love.

It may have added a bit more to your piece if it longer and had centered on maybe one example of how love failed her, or how she saw it as failing.

This could be the prologue to such a piece -each  chapter would be how love failed in one case. It would be an interesting story told through Parker's eyes.---who if you didn't know by now --is my favorite character.

I would be very interested in seeing a story like that. Want to give it a try? 

Reviewer: bucky Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 09:51 am

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