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Title: Chapter 1

Interesting concept. Seeing through a character's eyes is always interesting. I wish you would have gone further, I felt as though you were just warming up!
Nice job. Keep writing.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 09:05 pm
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