Mabye CVS and SLM should have written it like this. I like this more!!! The best authors have no control of their writing from what I've learned from being around this fandom..
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 01:39 am
I absolutely love the idea of "family" rings, hmm, that was very lovely and yes, it's so nice to see that Miss Parker is still kicking butt and taking names- but mostly just kicking butt, haha.
Also, the way you wrote Thomas was very respectful to all involved, you didn't trivialize him or write him off as Parker's "whim". That was perfect, nightowl.
You haven't lost or sickened me, haha. You've followed canon, imo, and really, you can do no wrong, unlike CVS and SLM- they did wrong plenty of times.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/06/11 12:48 am
I'm fairly new to the concept of fanfiction, so let me start by saying that I enjoyed the idea of starting the chapters with a song lyric that is threaded through out the chapter. The lyrics chosen are interesting and some of them are very thought provoking by themselves.
Your chapters seem to grow in length as the story progresses, which I like because you cover a lot of emotions and descriptive information that adds life to your story.
You call yourself the typo queen - which I find funny because you do have a few, but I get so involved in the story I don't notice them as a rule, but because you refer yourself as such I tend to mentally note them, and chuckle.
The story is very interesting in the way you put it together. I always loved the show, so your vision of the characters comes across so familar to me.
Thank you for sharing your ideas and work. I have enjoyed the ride so far and hope you continue to write it. Plan B sounds like another fun ride.
Reviewer: Adamsjoy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/07/08 02:09 am
What a superb chapter. You are certainly keeping us guessing right to the end. I love the fact that you are keeping Miss Parker's character true to form and she is still as "lively" as ever.
Congratulations on a well-written story so far. As always, we are totally greedy for the next one!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/07/08 08:51 pm
I enjoyed the varied emotions you delivered in the chapter, but Ihave to say the part where Jem and Jarod decided to allow one of the agents to talk to Miss Parker on the beach after their charade was well done.
I would have liked to have seen that on an episode, "ouch that had to hurt". That was truly a Miss Parker moment.Hope the next chapter is on the way.
Reviewer: Tess Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/07/08 11:21 pm
I had begun to think you weren't going to finish this epic story. I know you said it was never intended to go beyond 10,000 words--and lately that is just a chapter!
Good plotting, you have several pots boiling at the same time which keeps it interesting. I am surprised that you married them, after remembering a comment that <Jarod doesn't deserve her>-yes, I know that was because of the way he taunted her. However with that being said- I think you handled it just as Parker would have wanted that scene, no big wedding but a small and informal one. I like the description of MP/J's return and all that ensued.
You wrote with enough description and emotion that it was like watching one of the better episodes. And I liked them all---just some better than others.
Your mix of the Pretender world and the AU is interesting. I am never sure where you will go and when I'm fairly sure of direction you surprise me.
I like the way the story fits in with the title, it is about what we need as Humans to exist with ourselves and each other. At least that is what I get out of it. And of course I love that Parker plays such a major role.
I look forward to more --hopefully sooner. I am curious as to Plan B, and the agency guys --yes they do seem to explain the state of the world don't they! Intentional or not.
Keep Writing. More soon??
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/07/08 09:38 pm
