Still on the ship and enjoing the smooth sailing thanks. :)
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 01:24 am
I love the Beatles lyrics you included- very fitting choice, nightowl. Very lovely scenes between Parker and Gemini and while you didn't go into details of the wedding ceremony, the imagery was lovely enough, the descriptions were so well done that the imagination could fill in the rest.
Haha, typo queen? No, you are not.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/06/11 12:36 am
This is great! i loved it!
Reviewer: janeway Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/08 07:18 am
This was amazing. I like that you took your time and let the story develop. The dynamics between the characters was detailed and interesting.
My only thought is that the wedding itself seemed to be a little rushed. Perhaps you have that worked out in upcoming chapters?
So the adventure begins in the next chapter? Is Berby a straight shooter or a traitor to them? Looking forward to the answer
Author's Response:
Thank you, for some reason this chapter demanded more time and thought, and I just wasn't happy with the end result. I think I was already trying to move ahead with the adventure in my mind so... that's my excuse. The wonderful ladies that read for me are the reason the chapters turn out as well as they do!
Yes, I have planned to do some of the details of the wedding in flash backs. The chapter was already long and I was afraid of it getting out of hand.
and yes again, the adventure begins in the next chapter. Someone is not who or what they appear. ;-)
Thank you so much for being a regular reader and sharing your thoughts on the story! It is appreciated.
Reviewer: mrbig Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/05/08 03:05 am
What a great chapter this is ....as always, you continue to weave a wonderful story and I am still clinging to the edge of my seat!
I am so glad this is turning into a great "epic" ....you write so professionally and with great feeling for the characters....what will we do when this story is finished ? Simply look forward to the next one !!!
PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE !!! I must know if Col Berby is on the level. Thank you for a wonderful chapter and I am so looking forward to the next one.
You are up there with the best!
Author's Response:
I really don't think I can live up to your very kind review! Thank you! I'm flattered that you think so highly of the story, and again I have to say that the ladies that read and give me pointers are the reason the story turns out as well as it does. I can come up with story plots, but it's a whole other world to get it down into something other people will understand your vision and enjoy it.
As I reread the story AFTER I posted it I found stupid mistakes, like dangling words from a rewrite that I somehow?? didn't catch when rereading again. Your kind encouragement gives me the impetus to try harder and keep going. We are nearing the end. Thank you again.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/05/08 08:21 pm
