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Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

This Colonel seems maybe untrustworthy but I hope not. Nope I'm not disapointed.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/18 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

Incredible. I love the back stories you've given us, the story of Dannie/Einnad and the way you entwine the past and present, it's phenomenal. I'm still a bit suspicious of Berby and hope that he won't double cross Miss Parker and co.

And no, you aren't going to disappoint. Stop saying that. *smiles*

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 12:21 am
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

WOW !!!

Fantastic chapter ....what a superb mixture you have brewed up for us.  This is turning into a first rate epic masterpiece!!!  You just get better and better!!

Please, please keep going ....I am sure we are all on the edge of our seats .......what does Plan B hold for us ?? I am sure it will be every bit as exciting as the previous chapters. 

I love the fact that you are not rushing this but taking the time to develop the characters and allowing us to enjoy them.  So many writers are in such a hurry to tell the story and we arrive at the end before, we the reader, have had an opportunity to fully comprehend all the facets of the plot. 

Congratulations on a superb chapter!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

You have to be the sweetest person, I don't think I can ever live up to your kind words. At least I know by your reviews that you are indeed reading the story and following me through the maze.

thank you so much.  

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/04/08 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

Great job. You have made built this into a story with mulitple diminsions, romance, suspense, action. adventure and now a touch of espionage.

 I enjoy your characters --the life you breath into them, they are life like and true to the series. Actually, in some ways better defined than the series. 

Can you tell I am enjoying this? Good work. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Bucky, you are always encouraging, and that is so welcomed. I try to keep your vision of Parker in mind as I write!!  ;-)  I know that helps! ha ha.

Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/04/08 04:35 am
Title: Chapter 10 If Loving was enough

Not disappointed at all! Still really like your work and the way you write. You give life to the characters and their feelings and emotions, and it's really original and very well done! Sorry if I didn't let a lot of reviews but I never manage to let one (the security code is always a bit tricky and I end up writting a lot and sending nothing...) But just so you know, that's one of my favourite fanfic still in progress... so don't stop there and carry on with this so wonderful work!!!

 

 

As I said, really tricky security code, I'm trying a second time...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sometimes I think I'm over my head in this story and reviews like yours and some of the others keep me going. Thank you for taking the time to read and let me know you are reading.

Yes, sometimes I have to play with the security code more than once too. But your review is worth it to me. Thanks for not giving up on the code or me.

Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/04/08 02:37 pm
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