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Title: Chapter 7

I'm still entertained. :)

Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/02/18 12:58 am
Title: Chapter 7

You are not the typo queen, but you are the "damn, that was hot!" queen! Who knew that something as mundane and ordinary as leg bristle/shaving could be so amazingly sexy?

It was very cute the way she was only toying with him and then it suddenly became something bigger than the both of them and left Jarod aroused and fumbling- so funny, nightowl. You write them so well.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter 7 ..really enjoyed reading this.  Nice and long too .....can't wait to read the next one ! 

Loved the mystery bit from the Centre ..... keep up the good work, nightowl!  You are much appreciated!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this. I have to say that I'm somewhat flying by the seat of my pants!rnrnThank you for your very kind words. They are appreciated.

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 7

nice long chapters to get the wide range of action and romance.

Gotta love the leg shaving, but the mystery that lies ahead is even more captivating. Can you do introduce us to something new there too.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, I must have got the leg shaving part right! or just surprised everyone with it. Don't know if I can top that one with anything else I write.

Reviewer: mrbig Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:25 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Mmm, interesting. I really liked the shaving bitt. ;-) Never heard Cario before...*goes of to look it up* Good chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: In Chapter 6 I used the full name of Macario so shortened it to Cario for the more intimate nickname her mother and the child Jarod would have used.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 7

I think I'm going to hate to see this end. The shaving part is one of my all time favorite parts. I think I'd like to give that one a shot.

I can't imagine Bridgette as the queen. It just doesn't work. Curiouser an curiouser how will you work it out! I can't wait to see it.

Author's Response: Interesting that the shaving bit is going over so well with you ;-PrnI am pleased you are enjoying the story. Thank you for your comments!

Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 09:48 pm
Title: Chapter 7

This is getting better and better. Best leg shaving I've read yet. Only leg shaving romance that I've seen.

Think you nailed the characters. Nice build up to this chapter and this chapter is one brill piece of work.

Author's Response: Thank you for you kind comments.

Reviewer: Bree Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 03:45 pm
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