Made of granite... it did seem like that. Great job with this. You haven't lost me for sure.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 12:18 am
Oh, nightowl, wow, have I mentioned the inclusion of these lyrics? Great, great job and very fitting. I'm only familiar with one DF (RIP) tune: "Lonely in Love" (awesome sax). I'm youtubing Iracus now (nice).
This was another excellent chapter. Jarod's explanations and the reservations he has were all perfectly done and I could just imagine the major's reactions. Also, Jarod's admission/acknowledgement/acceptance of his role in his and Parker's relationship (or lack thereof) is quite refreshing.
I'm pleased that he could step back and see the err of his ways, despite what his best intentions might have been for her.
In the show, he always seemed, well, not only unapologetic about his "slaps in her face" but also oblivious and even uncaring and just plain mean at times, as if he was tormenting/manipulating her and enjoying it. Bad, Jarod.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/11 04:29 am
Lost us... I would think not.
I have just arrived to this story and am finding it extremely well written. I love the premise you have established and the way you are choosing to carry this out. Loved also the interaction between Jem (or is it Gem... You confused me there) and MP. Will you reveal her name? The way you wrote it leads me to understand you have already decided on what it could be... (greatest mystery of all PRETENDER mysteries if you ask me).
I am not pressuring you to update soon, but I hope you know that I will continue here, waiting for the next chap, whenever that might be.
Happy new year!!
Reviewer: bloodymary2 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/08 03:33 pm
no way!!!! you haven't lost anyone yet :o)
the story is great and even progressing. can't wait to read more of this one :o)
peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/08 07:57 am
Oh my God!! I really like this piece of work! That's really and you really respect the characters' feelings and actions. It could have been a part of the show... I'm impressed and waiting for more!!!!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/01/08 05:32 am
