Yep. I always thought they were both pretenders too. Miss Parker is just as much of a pretender as Jarod. Great minds thinking alike. Well done.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/02/18 12:11 am
*sighs* That scene between Miss Parker and Gemini was absolutely the most lovely, touching thing I've read in fanfic history.
And then Jarod's "...still bewitching young boys.." - loved it but even better was Parker's reply, haha. Great give and take and again, the dialogue was brilliant.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/11 04:07 am
I love seeing you run with this story! This chapter was much different than I expected, but I was happily surprised.
The name game was right on. And best of all you know how I like my Miss Parker written, well done. ;-)
Cute line about the big boys too.
More soon. Please. I am thinking of a short story myself, just from reading yours! See that's why you should write to motivate some of us that don't write!
[Report This]Date: 03/01/08 05:38 pm
