Rats. I just noticed this wasn't completed. I'm going to read it anyway since I'm hooked and all.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 11:58 pm
Oh, so sad. Poor Miss Parker. "You don't have what I need for pain." But Jarod's words were great. "You're not expendable"- oh, nightowl, you make him so-- so like-able. Why do you do that? haha.
I love how well they communicate and compromise even if she is still moody and snippy. And it's great to see her well taken care for a change.
This is how that episode should have played out (Instead of him leaving her there to the vultures). This is what really happened and in my mind, will always be what happened. You got it right, and the writers- well, they had it all wrong.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/11 03:54 am
Terrific, I didn't expect to get to a computer for another week, but they have these cafe's all over the resort, and I'm just getting ready to hit the slopes thought I'd read and review in case I hit a tree!
I really loved the back and forth between MP/J. You did a good job with what they argued about and how they argued. I can just see Jarod being guilty after forgetting Parker in bed. By the way - that woman can really hold her water! ;-)
I was happy to see this, and hope that you may surprise me by the next chapter real soon. Providing I don't meet up with any trees before that.
[Report This]Date: 29/12/07 09:02 am
I loved the arguement, because that is how I see those two sparing. I think that is also how Jarod would react when he did something and tried to cover it, first with not revealing all to her, and the second time by enjoying himself and forgetting her.
I think this chapter is the best in that you took a moment and really dug into it with your insights of the two main characters.
Now of course I'm very interested in seeing what happens next. Is Parker softening will she become part of the unit? OR you will throw the first punch!
Nicely done, looking forward to more of course.
[Report This]Date: 29/12/07 08:56 am
