They are getting on so well. I like the castle in the moat comment. Good storytellng too.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 11:49 pm
You have an exceptional grasp of these characters and the way you write Parker and Jarod is- just amazing. And the dialogue is brilliant. "Bear bating" and "removed the teeth" (taking away her weapon) were both incredible lines but my personal favorite thus far is: "damn it Jarod, did you take all my clothes?" hehe!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/11 03:37 am
Keep up with the good work! i have a feeleing this is going to be great story.
Peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/07 01:48 am
Hi there! Really good start. I can't wait to read more, so keep it up. :o)
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/07 11:55 pm
First: THANK YOU for getting the next chapter up!
I enjoyed the dialog, you keep Parker's spirit alive with it. I have to say it will be nice to get Parker out of the sick bed and back up and fighting.
You are doing a good job with this. You know I'll be asking for more.
Date: 23/12/07 08:51 pm
Nice addition to the first chapter. It's an interesting story, I really think I prefer it (so far) to the episode that aired on TV.
Keep going I think you can pull this off! I'm betting on it. ;o)
Date: 23/12/07 08:46 pm
