...But the more I think about it, the more I NEED to know what's going on!!! lol I don't care what Syd thinks, I want more!!
This piece is awesome-I was advised to read it (by a very, very smart individual who deserves much praise) and I was so disappointed that I didn't discover it earlier!!
I absolutely loved your take on Angelo-he's so dismissed by so many and yet the conflict you've given his character is amazing! You've clearly thought his role through and have certainly changed what seems to be precedent amongst most writers (a few give him a ‘help Jarod' role, but you've given him a character in and of his own). I'd really love to see this piece continue... please... it's been entirely too long lol!!
Author's Response:
hey.. thanks so much for the review. I really do feel terrible that i've let this sit so long. Just give me a little more time to get my thesis out of the way and the writing shall flow again.
Reviewer: _jk_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/07/08 04:46 am
nnnnnice!!!!! I was thinking it was em and jay...
I hope ur working on this!!!! :-))))
Author's Response: always..it's just that the writing up of my thesis is competing for time, but thanks for the pop in, gives me a good kick in the ass!
[Report This]Date: 24/06/08 04:51 pm
nnnnnice!!!!! I was thinking it was em and jay...
I hope ur working on this!!!! :-))))
[Report This]Date: 24/06/08 04:50 pm
Interesting KatieQ, at least we now know who one of the people in the beginning is. I never would have guessed Jarod.
Author's Response:
I thought i gave it away in chapter before with the whole ice cream thing.. i guess not! I have succeeded in my mission then..
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/08/07 08:20 pm
I love that I don't know what's going to happen. I have an idea, but you're just so tricky. Wonderful chapter. Especially loved the Parker/Jarod interaction.
Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoyed the J/MP interaction, as it was my favourite part to write! I'm starting to unravel the plot, so all shal be clear! I'm just happy i've managed to keep you guys guessing.. i guess that's mission accomplished.. although much slower than i ever meant to be. Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/07 02:09 pm
Best chapter yet, Katie. Love all the twists and turns. Was sure that it was MP and Jarod talking, now am thinking Zoe and J. Or maybe Emily (preferably) and the Major is the one sick. Aaahhh, the torture of the wait...how long until the next chap?
Author's Response:
how long until the next chapter.. what an excellent question...
soon i hope .. soon :)
and i shall reveal nothing! Thanks for R&R, it's always very appreciated.
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/07 10:41 am
Oh the plot thikens... Love how Jarod baricated himself in the tech room, and poor lil' Brootsie.
Overal great chapter
Author's Response: trust you to be concerned with Brootsie and his cross-dressing friends Reviewer: Manoline Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/08/07 10:01 am
I love it. It was worth the wait. The J/MP dynamics were especially good in this one. Keep writing!
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/07 09:57 am
I love it. It was worth the wait. The J/MP dynamics were especially good in this one. Keep writing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed.. and i am doing just that.. writing.. although the african saga is winning the fight for control of the muse at this instant in time
Date: 07/08/07 09:57 am
