Today is my first time on this website, and I've spent the ENTIRE day reading this story. I LOVE it. Parker's character, in particular, is dead on. My guess for the opening dialogue is that it's a series of cell phone conversations between Jarod and his father all taking place before he turns himself in. More soon? Pretty please?
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying.. this story was ust a little side project that was interfering with the other story i'm writing, but it's taken on it's own life form. I'm having so much fun writing the MP part in this story and i'm glad you enjoy her as well! Thanks soo much for feedback..it's feeds the fire that runs my muse. now if only we can find time to let her be free ;)
[Report This]Date: 07/07/07 04:48 pm
Interesting KatieQ! But I agree with the others... unravelling? Hmm, maybe several chapters down the road perhaps but not now.
So how much longer do we have to wait for the next chapter? And don't say it's being beta'd. That's a sorry excuse if I ever heard of one! (and BTW, Manoline has claimed the next Sleepyhead chapter so I've been spared that fate!)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/07 09:49 pm
Great story, but I can't figure out the two speakers at the start of the chapters. Sometimes I think Parker and Gemini and other times I think Gemini and Ethan. Not nice to torment a N.A. buddy this way.
Author's Response: ooh but a little torment is fun.. read the conversation. there is a BIG clue in it.. i promise :P
Date: 31/05/07 03:50 pm
Okay I miiiiiight know who one of the speakers is, but I'm not at all sure. As for the unraveling, that is a complete lie! I am as in the dark as ever, missy! Haha but it certainly did not disappoint and I enjoyed it as always. Keep it up and I look forward to your next chapter. :D
Author's Response: hahaha... so maybe beginning to unravel was a bit generous. although when you look back a few chapters from now.. it will be the turning point.. i think anyways. but thanks.. glad you are enjoying still...
[Report This]Date: 31/05/07 01:48 pm
