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Title: Chapter 6 - A Cause for Hope

Oh KatieQ! You've out done yourself this time! I love this chapter, it has everything, suspense, intrique, mystery and love Miss Parker in it! She's strong and smart mouth one minute

“I’m just quivering in my stilettos to see how this one turns out.”
and compassionate with Broots, Syd and even Jarod the next.

OK the voices at the beginning of each chapter... hmm. could this have anything to do with the 'inner sense'? I'm looking forward to the next chapter! WooHoo!


You know, I was thinking about changing the pointy stick to a cattle prod since I want more of this story ASAP! However since you wrote this in response to my review of your "Gone but Not Forgotten"

"although our friendly dictator has told me i cannot post anymore africa until you have agreed to write the next sleepyhead.. so poke that stick in the other direction chiquita."

I think I will back off. As much as I am flattered by your confidence in my writting ability, I doubt I can take up such a challenge! I've looked at the other authors and boy! Talk about some of the best writers in the FF group! I don't feel I'm in the same league!

 

 



Author's Response:

oooh RaChell, you are much much to kind, but i am so glad you enjoyed this chappie!!

put that cattle prod away.. only i am allowed to play with those.

go claim sleephead, you are more than qualified, miss i write wonderful stories and am too modest to admit it.. the next segment is CRYING out for someone to claim it.. and the e-dict has decided it shall be you, and I support that!

until then.. me go back to writing, and thanks again :P

***** WARNING PTB ALERT!!********* 

As your BENEVOLENT dictator (who allows such wonderfulness as colour and pics in your stories... lol)
I find myself in the unusual position of agreeing with  my most troublesome of authors. Indeed you must needs take up the next chapter of the Sleepyhead saga!!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 08:36 pm
Title: Chapter 6 - A Cause for Hope

Yaaay, update!  

Nice to see Jarod isn't dead..yet. Many great Parker comments. Let's hope Syd is on the right track.



Author's Response:

dead..yet... lol.. i'll try my best to get the next part out to you guys soon.. thanks as always for the feedback :D

 

 - K 

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 01:57 pm
Title: Chapter 6 - A Cause for Hope

Cancer? There's no pretending out of that one! Ugh. Love your story as usual. Your Parker one liners are top notch. Keep it up and update soon. :)

Author's Response:

hehehe.. i'm glad you appreciate my attempt at Parker.. glad you are enjoying, and thanks for the feedback! Till next time!

 - K

Reviewer: TLM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 01:28 pm
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