Nooooo! Cliff hanger!
(Despite the evil cliff *scowls*) I really like this story. Nice to for once see some Jarod/Raines interaction. Looking forward to seeing how the chapter openings tie in with the rest.
Author's Response:
ooh the Jarod/Raines stuff is fun, and i can't wait to write more!!
thanks for the feedback :D
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/04/07 12:19 pm
Nice! Great chapter and so riviting! I can't wait for the next but yes I know evil stats so I will try !
Nice touch on the way Raines has Jarod hidden away and the team has to look for him. Love Broots' interaction with Lyle who is on another dead end chase.
You certainly left us hanging with this one.
Author's Response:
thanks for trying.. i am truly blessed... lol.. thanks for the feedback as always Rachell.. i should give you five stars for all of your kind feedback..
till next time. .enjoy the cliffhanger... mwahahahahhaha
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/04/07 07:53 pm
You and your suspenseful endings! I'd like Jarod to have a pulse in the next chapter if that's not too much to ask. Seriously, great story. Keep it comin!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry.. it really isn't fair of me to leave you with a suspenseful ending.. when i cannot promise a timely update (timely in katie land is a few days).. btw.. missy, where is your next chapter?? hehehe
thanks for the feedback though.. and i promise.. this isn't sleephead and there shall be a pulse.. any guesses on who is talking at the beginning :P
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/07 01:50 pm
