Hi just read your story it was a good story.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/03/19 08:04 pm
Not one of my fave, because of little David...you know. But I read it many times and I still enjoy reading this sometimes. It's a nice fiction, for MPJ shippers of course ;)
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/07/13 09:37 am
Too sappy, but it was a good story overall. More suspense and angst for future stories.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/03/10 11:21 pm
God, it was so sad. When David was shot I really hat tears in my eyes. But I was glad to read, that at the end, they were happy again.
Again, it was really good. :)
Reviewer: MissCatherine Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/09 02:13 pm
Great! I love it just like all your stories!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/06/09 12:33 pm
that was sooo cool. A bit much on the honey this and honey that but IT WAS GOOD. AWWW
Reviewer: LJP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/03/07 10:09 pm
Mh, sometimes too sappy, ... but as a shipper I have to say that I really liked it ...
Reviewer: Thara Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/07 11:35 pm
so sweet and so sad
Reviewer: IceQueen20 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/07 12:15 pm
Kris, you still use "damned" instead of "damn"...just wondering why...do you doubt the accuracy? I liked your story a lot the first time I read it, and second time around it was just as great. But then again, it's easy to please a J/MP shipper with a shipper story! I wish you wouldn't call her that name though! Really! And while I suppose people might like the use of profanity, I find it quite unnecessary since there are more creative ways for MP to be emphatic. So I'm glad you didn't use it too often! You write MP quite well with a few exceptions, but then again, nobody's perfect! Keep writing, especially great shipper stories! :)
Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/07 08:02 pm
