Reviews For Seizing Destiny
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Title: Office

This weird relationship among Lyle, Mp and J is so easy to read because you're great in descripotions of their feelings. This last part is great, you might even like Lyle!

 

“You are her something,” Lyle smirked. “You belong to her. Might as well tattoo ‘Property of Miss Parker’ on your forehead.”

 Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/13 11:12 am
Title: Office

Lovely. That is really the best word for this fic. It is beautiful. There is still a lot of drama at the center but a lot has changed. I'm about the read the sequel and I really hope that you put the reaction of Jarod's family in there somewhere. Though, either way I suppose it will be absolutely fabulous based on the quality of this work.

 Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/13 03:53 am
Title: Office

This is a new twist. Great story though. One of the few who do write well with an interesting plot.

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/01/10 12:32 am
Title: Office

Liked most of it, HATED the end. I don't like what you did to Sydney. He wouldn't have done that, EVER.

 Reviewer: AcaciaJules Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/10 04:26 am
Title: Office

Ack!  Where's the rest of this?  You've got me hooked.

 Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/10/08 09:19 pm
Title: Office

This is an interestingly constructed story. The characters are strong and convincing in the roles we are accustomed to, and you did a good job writing the story, plotting the plot and describing the action.

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/08 10:33 pm
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