It's very interessing so where are the others chapters ?
Reviewer: tana Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/16 08:12 am
Hope you have given up completing this fic. It's a wonderful 2 chapter start.
Just read Falling Slowly ch3 too. Two thumbs up!
Reviewer: Goldentail Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/09/09 09:07 am
Aaah, I love this--but it's torture to stop here. I hope you're going to finish it! :)
Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/10/08 03:49 am
What an excellent update - well worth the wait !! I loved the way you explained how Jarod and Miss P got together and the emotions behind it all. And I also really enjoyed the confrontation between Ethan and Lyle. This is a truly excellent story and I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next update (hint, hint)...!!
Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/09/06 01:57 pm
I really love your story. It's well build, good plot, great characters and lovely language. Looking forward to more
Date: 11/09/06 09:03 am
Just when I thought you abandoned the story I find another chapter. Yay! Great chapter, especially the flashbacks after the baby's death. And now that we know Alex is behind all this, I'm curious to see what's coming next. So, please update again soon.
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/06 11:58 pm
The long wait can be forgiven with this chapter. I thought it was well written and it too keeps you hanging on to the edge of your seat. Please post the next one soon.
Reviewer: Tess Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/06 06:54 pm
Another great chapter please continue soon.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/06 06:19 am
Well written, easy to read. Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapt.
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/06 04:29 am
love the update , I can't wait until the next part, please update soon
Reviewer: cally Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/06 12:22 am
I liked this development with the Inner Sense, and with the brothers being involved like this... Don't leave us hanging here, please continue the story!
Reviewer: Mira Signed [Report This]Date: 22/06/06 12:27 pm
Oh, you can't leave it hanging! A nice long chapter and so well put together. You have to continue this soon. Please.
Reviewer: Tess Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/06 08:01 pm
Your stories came highly recommended, and justifiably so. Very well written by someone who knows the characters. My biggest complaint about some of the fanfic is that they don't capture the true nature of the characters throughout the show, but focus in on one minute of one episode that showed one small element. You have not done that. None of us are measured by one instant of our life. It may come back to haunt us but it is not necessarily who we are. To make a long review short: Your portrayal of Miss Parker is not the gun, the smoking nostril, the bitch. She was more than all that, she was intelligent, strong, determined with hidden compassion and loyalty. I hope to read more from you in the near future. It made my morning.
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/06 09:53 am
Wow - what an excellent start. Another tightly woven story from you - you've created a tale that leaves me with lots of questions that need to be answered - so please update soon !!
Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/05/06 05:37 pm
It is good to see you writing again. I know I have missed it. This story has a wonderful beginning-- the next chapter can't come soon enough! Zipp
Reviewer: Zipp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 11:39 am
Wow, this is great stuff. I'll be tuning in to see the rest...
Reviewer: Jo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 07:38 am
Who’s after Parker and why? What’s Lyle up to? It’s a great beginning and I’m curious to see where you’re taking this. So please update soon. Cathy
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 07:09 am
Great start please continue soon.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 05:52 am
Great start please continue soon.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 05:51 am
good chapter, please continue.
Reviewer: angel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/06 01:18 am
love this..next chapter pls...
Reviewer: goldentail Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/05/06 10:20 pm