Read this one through all in one big hit. How much worse can it get? I feel like smacking Jarod for being such a fool, he soooo should have killed Lyle, Sydney would have helped him deal with it in therapy... lol.
More soon please!!!!
Date: 03/06/07 06:52 am
All I can say is wow. I just read four chapters straight and you kept me on the edge of my seat(actually I think I was more hovering a meter over my seat for the most part) throughout the whole story. Every time you think it's going to work out, you read the next paragraph and everything is ten times worse than it was five minutes ago.Who lives and who dies? There's what I want to happen, and there is what makes the best story. I'll just leave that up to you.
Love your story and cannot wait for more.
Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]Date: 12/05/07 04:07 pm
Yeaaaaaaaaaah!! I'm so happy you posted!!
It's still so captivating; I can't imagine what will happen next!!
So it's up to you to decide who lives or dies!! Maybe a little luck for J and Margaret won't hurt!!
Just a little note: "He didn’t wonder any more how the man had been able to convince the authorities that his father had killed his best friend." Mr Lyle, the real one ("father" of our Lyle!) didn't kill Lyle's (Bobby) best friend. But Bobby did and use his corpse to make believe that his father kill his son (him, Bobby), and not his best friend. Bobby's friend was declared "missing". So our Lyle "had convinced" that his father killed him, using his friend's corpse as if it was his body. I hope I'm clear!! I feel I'm repeating myself!!
I'm eager to read the sequel, as always!!
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/05/07 02:47 am
Very well done! Your story is so suspenseful and full of intrigue. I like the way it flows, and you keep everything along moving nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 06/05/07 01:54 pm
