Hi just read your story it was really good. Are you going to do a sequel? I hope you do I like to see how Lyle gets it.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/02/19 02:05 am
Great take on this different storyline, but the end of each chapter always seemed to be dangling and the continuation to the next chapter was disjointed. Good read though!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/01/10 07:48 pm
Although I have read this at fanfiction.net, it is still good. The bold makes it difficult to read, meaning that I keep on haviing to copy this to a document to "debold" it for me to read. But otherwise, no complaints. Good story
Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/06 02:15 pm
What a great story hope you are going to write a sequel it would be a great shame not to.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/06 01:07 pm
two lines in, I realized that I'd already read this on fanfic.net, but i read it again which speaks to the quality of your work! Are you planning a sequel or did you just end that way so you could think about it?
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/06 01:26 am