Reviews For Entanglement and Lies
Title: Part 1
Date: 25/06/15 08:42 am
I like your story.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/15 08:42 am
Title: Part 1
Date: 02/02/10 07:52 pm
This is one of my favorites of many when it's a pretend with both main characters doing a pretend together. More updates or sequel! This is really good writing as well. Good use of contractions since many writers forget to write how a typical conversation is sometimes. A lot of writers have a tendency to write to formally and forget how real diaglogue should be.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/10 07:52 pm