Title: Part 1

Thank you. I don't read many stories where there is nonconsensual sexual consent warnings. I tried to read one earlier and got so pissed off at the stupidity and ignorance surrounding consent.That's what I get for reading authors in alphabetical order. I was so pissed I accidentally gave it 5 stars and had to go back and give it 1 to make up for it.

I'll come to favorites from now on and go from there. There's a reason you're a favorite. This was well written.

The subject is definitely not a common sense issue where people just normally know that rape is wrong and write it as a crime or evil.

I applaud you for the way you wrote this. No glorification of rape. No dried up old brain-dead c*nt telling Jarod to go rape the woman he wants to possess...as if anyone could ever possess Miss Parker lol.

I really appreciate that it's clear a crime and wrong was committed and that you wrote it maturely and with empathy for people who live through this. Thank you for being sensitive and clear about this.

Reviewer: Carla Smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/04/19 10:46 pm
Title: Part 1

this is just awesome! why sid you stop writimg? loooooooove it

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/06/16 10:40 pm
Title: Part 1

First I have to say, that I love this story :)

Second I have to say, that you should really continue, because I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/13 07:49 pm
Title: Part 1

Hello Miss Brynna will there be more to this. It's realy good a ten.

Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/12 11:31 pm
Title: Part 1

Oh wow, this is just getting good! The only thing though is that Shelly's responses or really her manner of dialogue should sound a little more refined considering her disciplined environment most of her life. Hopefully, more updates at some point?!?

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/04/10 11:21 pm
Title: Part 1

It's really sad, that you dudn't finish this!

I love it and want more!

It's good to see Miss Parker show a few emotions and being so protective!

Nice work!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/09 01:58 am
Title: Part 1

Wow ~ I would really like this story to be finished.

Very different kind of plot and definately intrigueing.

Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/05/08 12:07 am
Title: Part 1

Interesting plot line. Much more in character than many things I have read. It would take time for everyone to come to terms with eachother and the situation, and you seem to have captured the emotion. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: jatineze Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/05 07:12 pm


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