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Title: The Beginning

Awesome dialogue. Since I'm rereading it for the 3rd time, don't have to tell you how much I liked it. 

 Reviewer: Vaanya69 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/18 09:55 am
Title: The Beginning

This is DIFFERENT, and that's why I like it. Charlie really is lovely as a kid, even more as an adult, and I love that memory you created of him and Jarod at the end. Finally, I must say this last chapter is one of the best ever read on this site, so thank you! 

 Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/13 02:17 am
Title: The Beginning

actually I think it is a good plot, and well executed. It's been a while since you have posted anything new. It would be nice to see something from you! Please.

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/01/08 12:22 pm
Title: The Beginning

I loved this story! THis is what I would envision happenning in the long run..in my world of course! Great job! Your a great author!

 Reviewer: DarkAngel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/07 04:31 pm
Title: The Beginning

I absolutely loved your story.Charlie was just fantastic character as Jarod and Parker's son.You had everything the pretender usally had,the baddies and the goodies.Once again great work and thank you for the great story.

 Reviewer: dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/06 01:52 am
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