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Title: Part 11

“Over the years, you have constantly asked me what I want from you. Well, besides the obvious there is one last thing I want from you. After that, I’ll leave permanently, get out of you life and stay out. All I want is a definitive answer.”

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On impulse, Jarod leaned forward as she finished releasing her lower lip and hungrily kissed her, using his tongue to force open her lips...

 

I LOVE IT! Chapter 5 & 11 are just amazing. The relationship you wrote reminds me of what I think about Parker: just one kiss would be enough to make her melt down for our lovely Pretender. And the scene like Bonnie and Clyde is just amazing! I love this, well done! 

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/13 02:54 pm
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