Reviews For Crimson Kiss
Title: Chapter 1
Date: 18/09/05 03:38 pm
Wow, now that was something different. I am impressed, I really really like it! And your english is quite good btw. Are you from France?
Reviewer: Nea Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/05 03:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Date: 17/09/05 09:47 pm
interesting concept! I'm glad to hear that you plan to finish. I hate when I get involved in a story and the author quits...since you're working on your English..hearth should be heart and most of those don'ts should be 'doesn't', the nothings at the end "I don't want nothing to do with you' would work better if you used 'anything'--the joys of the mixed up English language
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/09/05 09:47 pm