This was well written and engaging, and the emotion - of both Jarod and Charles - was realistic.
The only point I would raise is that Charles chose Jarod's clone's name rather than let the boy choose a name himself, though he might have wanted Charles to choose a name for him as his parent the way Margaret and Charles had chosen Jarod, Kyle and Emily's names.
A nice piece, and I hope Jarod finds his family soon even though this was the end of the piece.Reviewer: planet p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 10:49 am
Just read your story it was good.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/07 08:38 pm