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Title: Part 6

Umm... ok. That is so disturbing. But well written so dude I'm here for the long haul. Well done mate!

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Date: 23/08/18 11:52 pm
Title: Part 5

That man is so freaking disturbed. Creepy creepy creepy af.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:48 pm
Title: Part 4

Gasping over here for breath. He can't kill her. You did a good job building suspense.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:45 pm
Title: Part 3

So nice and well written. You do a good job with characters too.

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Date: 23/08/18 11:37 pm
Title: Part 2

Oh wow. I can't even...

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Date: 23/08/18 11:31 pm
Title: Part 1

I asked Mirage for a recommendation and she sent me here. I'm so totally stoked that she did. You have pulled me right in.

 Reviewer: Shay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/18 11:24 pm
Title: Part 20

It was a very interessting story but you could have added an epiloge at least . Cause now we have another never ending story just like the shpw and it's tiring not to know ,you know .Oh well . Thanks again for sharing .

 Reviewer: tana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/06/16 10:05 am
Title: Part 20

Verry good. I'm so glad Miss Parker is ok. Beautiful job!

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 01:54 am
Title: Part 19

It HAS to.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 01:32 am
Title: Part 18

Positive thinking. Hoping Miss Parker is right.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 01:28 am
Title: Part 17

Poor Broots.

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Date: 21/04/16 01:22 am
Title: Part 16

Thought Ethan was about to punch Jarod...wouldn't want that.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 01:01 am
Title: Part 15

Crazy stuff.....but you write it well.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:54 am
Title: Part 14

what fun this is going to be lol.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:49 am
Title: Part 13

Strawberry shortcake lol.

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Date: 21/04/16 12:46 am
Title: Part 12

She HAS to survive. Jarod has to save her and kill Paul.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:36 am
Title: Part 11

Paul is definitely afflicted. I hope Jarod will "cure" him lol.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:33 am
Title: Part 10

What might happen indeed. Oooh really good.

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Date: 21/04/16 12:30 am
Title: Part 9

Get 'im Miss Parker. That's the spirit. I'm glad she's not broken.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:28 am
Title: Part 8

I wonder if Mr Parker is behind this. Or Lyle. Argghhh.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:25 am
Title: Part 7

Reallly worried about Miss Parker but yea the Paul douche was abused as a child. It's not his fault.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:21 am
Title: Part 6

OhhhH finally Ethan. Oh goddd. That Paul douche is nuts. Good job.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:18 am
Title: Part 5

I hope Jarod will give Paul the "help" he wants lol. Good job. I'm seriously loving this.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:15 am
Title: Part 4

Noooooo. Miss Parker can't die.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:12 am
Title: Part 3

ooooh uuuh. I'm hoping someone will start looking for her. Lot of unspoken words between Broots and Sydney and between Ethan and Jarod. I know Ethan will help...ummm I hope. Great writing.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/16 12:08 am
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